for Dark Envy11/23/2012 c22 f
Natalee plz make them make uo i hate sad endings
Natalee plz make them make uo i hate sad endings
5/1/2010 c23 
3mle81589
OMG! This story is fantastic. I can relate to Monica... because we all know what it feels like to be jealous, and to want something more and to finally break. But I wouldn't go as far as she did. I probably just would have had the feeling and tried improving myself. I'm on Natalee's side, obviously, but I can understand where Monica is coming from. I really hope your writers block improves, and good luck finishing the story. I'm positive whatever you write will be good. :)
3mle81589OMG! This story is fantastic. I can relate to Monica... because we all know what it feels like to be jealous, and to want something more and to finally break. But I wouldn't go as far as she did. I probably just would have had the feeling and tried improving myself. I'm on Natalee's side, obviously, but I can understand where Monica is coming from. I really hope your writers block improves, and good luck finishing the story. I'm positive whatever you write will be good. :)
5/11/2006 c23 iamdabomb
great story! i relate to natalee more! wat monica dus is just sick
great story! i relate to natalee more! wat monica dus is just sick
6/15/2005 c23 hellfire
i think i relate to Natalee and a little bit of Monica what if felt to be outcast but it no way to do what she did to Natalee she bound to crack and she did like the story it very good write more and also who will Natalee end up going with Blake or Jake my opinion i prefer Blake way better than Jake who cheated on Natalee with Parker oh yeah i think Parker deserve some1 else too b/c of her past.
i think i relate to Natalee and a little bit of Monica what if felt to be outcast but it no way to do what she did to Natalee she bound to crack and she did like the story it very good write more and also who will Natalee end up going with Blake or Jake my opinion i prefer Blake way better than Jake who cheated on Natalee with Parker oh yeah i think Parker deserve some1 else too b/c of her past.
5/29/2005 c23 goobersprinkle
for gods sake woman UPDATE!
for gods sake woman UPDATE!
3/29/2005 c23 AznPunkett
I love your story and I can't wait for the ending. But I think I relate more to Natalee...
I love your story and I can't wait for the ending. But I think I relate more to Natalee...
3/26/2005 c1 8Lost Soldier REVAMPED
Good call on that one! Oh, sweet irony! This piece is genius, I love it! It reminds me of some pieces I've written. Feel free to check them out.
8Lost Soldier REVAMPEDGood call on that one! Oh, sweet irony! This piece is genius, I love it! It reminds me of some pieces I've written. Feel free to check them out.
1/7/2005 c23 28Shadow of the Light
I know I'm a little slow to say anything about the story...I've been following it, though I don't believe I've been doing much reviewing. I love what you've done so far with the story, and you've done wonders with your characters and bringing them to life.I found that there were aspects of both Monica and Natalee I could relate too...but while I've never wished to destroy anothers life, I found Monica one that I could relate too in the begining. Natalee I found as I got to know her character I could relate to her as well...Really though I'm sure that you'll come up with a superb ending.I look forward to reading any new chapters you post! And who knows now that I know I've reviewed...I might just have to continue since its so close to the end.May your next chapter be soon, and happy writing! Keep up the great work! =^_^=
Shadow
28Shadow of the LightI know I'm a little slow to say anything about the story...I've been following it, though I don't believe I've been doing much reviewing. I love what you've done so far with the story, and you've done wonders with your characters and bringing them to life.I found that there were aspects of both Monica and Natalee I could relate too...but while I've never wished to destroy anothers life, I found Monica one that I could relate too in the begining. Natalee I found as I got to know her character I could relate to her as well...Really though I'm sure that you'll come up with a superb ending.I look forward to reading any new chapters you post! And who knows now that I know I've reviewed...I might just have to continue since its so close to the end.May your next chapter be soon, and happy writing! Keep up the great work! =^_^=
Shadow
1/2/2005 c23 28Arayuldawen
yes, I will definitely wait for the chapters. Hm, who do I relate more to. I'd say Natalee. She's had some really bad things happen to her, and there are a few things that, well, I definitely relate to. I can't wait til ya update ^_^
28Arayuldawenyes, I will definitely wait for the chapters. Hm, who do I relate more to. I'd say Natalee. She's had some really bad things happen to her, and there are a few things that, well, I definitely relate to. I can't wait til ya update ^_^
12/27/2004 c23 nnE
I'll definately wait. Good luck!
I'll definately wait. Good luck!
12/25/2004 c23 Cerise
I'm willing to wait for more chapters...In the beginning I could relate to Monica more; however I disapproved of the WAY she went about solving her problems. So I guess Natalee.
I'm willing to wait for more chapters...In the beginning I could relate to Monica more; however I disapproved of the WAY she went about solving her problems. So I guess Natalee.
12/23/2004 c23 32Cryptic Insanity
I can wait for the next few chapters ^_^
As for who I can relate to more, I'd have to say Monica only because I've never had such terrible things happen to me like Natalee did, but I have had the feeling of jealousy. It's just that Monica took it too far. But I do like Natalee character and want her to end up good.
32Cryptic InsanityI can wait for the next few chapters ^_^
As for who I can relate to more, I'd have to say Monica only because I've never had such terrible things happen to me like Natalee did, but I have had the feeling of jealousy. It's just that Monica took it too far. But I do like Natalee character and want her to end up good.
12/23/2004 c23 4quotata
i reckon, for me... i can relate to both... sort of... like monica... the calmer non psycho monica: slightly envious of someone elses popularity...
but natalee: well...you've made her more likable i guess but she's "normal" she's not under a fake fascade *shrug* am i helping?
well in the beginning when it was just small jealousies i related more to monica, but after her 'change' i relate more to natalee... for obvious reasons -.-; i'm not really an obsessive person...
4quotatai reckon, for me... i can relate to both... sort of... like monica... the calmer non psycho monica: slightly envious of someone elses popularity...
but natalee: well...you've made her more likable i guess but she's "normal" she's not under a fake fascade *shrug* am i helping?
well in the beginning when it was just small jealousies i related more to monica, but after her 'change' i relate more to natalee... for obvious reasons -.-; i'm not really an obsessive person...