for Dark Envy12/22/2004 c23 
16kaika switched
Haha, to be completely honest with you, I've forgotten which one's which! Monica's the crazy one, right? Well, regardless, I'll definitely be here if and when you update this story. Just let me know when you do and I'll come and read! Keep writing!
16kaika switchedHaha, to be completely honest with you, I've forgotten which one's which! Monica's the crazy one, right? Well, regardless, I'll definitely be here if and when you update this story. Just let me know when you do and I'll come and read! Keep writing!
12/22/2004 c23 Lostxwithoutxyou
YOU! *evil scowl* I thought you uploaded a brand new chapter so this was quite the disappointment!
Please write the next chapter as soon as you can! Answering your question: i think that i can relate to Natalee more because i can definately say I know how it feels to be betrayed by somebody close to me o_O
YOU! *evil scowl* I thought you uploaded a brand new chapter so this was quite the disappointment!
Please write the next chapter as soon as you can! Answering your question: i think that i can relate to Natalee more because i can definately say I know how it feels to be betrayed by somebody close to me o_O
12/20/2004 c23 18Ice Eyes
*impatient glare* fine fine, I can wait...but then again I haven't updated anything in over a year so I guess I can't throw stones now can i? whoops. anyway, hmm monica or natalee...actually neither. I can't really relate to one over the other. i guess I'm a tiny bit of each, and a lot of neither. Sorry if that doesn't make a whole lot of sense. I tried. now hurry up and write!
18Ice Eyes*impatient glare* fine fine, I can wait...but then again I haven't updated anything in over a year so I guess I can't throw stones now can i? whoops. anyway, hmm monica or natalee...actually neither. I can't really relate to one over the other. i guess I'm a tiny bit of each, and a lot of neither. Sorry if that doesn't make a whole lot of sense. I tried. now hurry up and write!
12/19/2004 c17 allie
definetly natalee.
i want her to become really pretty again and i want monica to die.
definetly natalee.
i want her to become really pretty again and i want monica to die.
12/19/2004 c23 2inconsequential me
Natalee. Most definitely Natalee. Yes, i have my random moments where I completely sympathize with Monica and think that my life is somewhat similar to hers, as are my emotions and whatnot, but not this whole psycho thing. i imagine i identify better with Natalee in the bigger picture, though... hope you can update soon =)
2inconsequential meNatalee. Most definitely Natalee. Yes, i have my random moments where I completely sympathize with Monica and think that my life is somewhat similar to hers, as are my emotions and whatnot, but not this whole psycho thing. i imagine i identify better with Natalee in the bigger picture, though... hope you can update soon =)
12/19/2004 c23 Writerofascientist
Of COURSE there are people still reading this! Over time I tend to delete stories that don't get updated anymore, but this one has remained on my favorite list for many months now! I'm willing to wait as long as possible just to see how this ends!
I related to both characters...Monica because I never feel as if I'll be good enough as all of the other "perfect" people out there (especially close friends)...but I also related to Natalee as well because I am used to getting the crap from people who seem to hate me for stuff that I have no control over being. Great work. Keep it up! I'll be waiting!
Of COURSE there are people still reading this! Over time I tend to delete stories that don't get updated anymore, but this one has remained on my favorite list for many months now! I'm willing to wait as long as possible just to see how this ends!
I related to both characters...Monica because I never feel as if I'll be good enough as all of the other "perfect" people out there (especially close friends)...but I also related to Natalee as well because I am used to getting the crap from people who seem to hate me for stuff that I have no control over being. Great work. Keep it up! I'll be waiting!
12/18/2004 c23 6Nickety
Indeed I'm willing to wait. I love this story. It's made me want to be hapy, sad, and mad. All in one insane package.
As for the Monica or Natalee. At the very beginning it was Monica. Everyone has that feeling of wanting to be someone else more "perfect" than them, though her route was a little drastic. But as the story went on, it was definitely Natalee. Rejection? Loner-ism? Falling from a peak of greatness and not knowing where to turn? Psychotic sibling? Can definitely relate to that.
No matter where you decide to take this story, I will be looking forward to the outcome. Even if it isn't so happy.
6NicketyIndeed I'm willing to wait. I love this story. It's made me want to be hapy, sad, and mad. All in one insane package.
As for the Monica or Natalee. At the very beginning it was Monica. Everyone has that feeling of wanting to be someone else more "perfect" than them, though her route was a little drastic. But as the story went on, it was definitely Natalee. Rejection? Loner-ism? Falling from a peak of greatness and not knowing where to turn? Psychotic sibling? Can definitely relate to that.
No matter where you decide to take this story, I will be looking forward to the outcome. Even if it isn't so happy.
12/16/2004 c18 Nickety
I already reviewed chapters 19 - 22 so I had to resort to chapter 18-ism to tell you that two weeks have come and gone.
Update, dawl-ing. Don't leave us all hanging here.
I already reviewed chapters 19 - 22 so I had to resort to chapter 18-ism to tell you that two weeks have come and gone.
Update, dawl-ing. Don't leave us all hanging here.
12/15/2004 c15 pissed off
i hate you. why did you have to make all these horrible things happen to natalee? some things like burning her hair and cutting her up is bad enough. but to take her virginity? that's the worse thing i can possibly imagine! even death is better!
i'm really sorry but i'm not going to read your story anymore. it's really great and well-written, but i hate what's happening. =(
i hate you. why did you have to make all these horrible things happen to natalee? some things like burning her hair and cutting her up is bad enough. but to take her virginity? that's the worse thing i can possibly imagine! even death is better!
i'm really sorry but i'm not going to read your story anymore. it's really great and well-written, but i hate what's happening. =(
9/26/2004 c22 16kaika switched
Well, it's been a little over two weeks. I hope you get the next chapter up soon. I don't know what to think of Natalee right now. I don't know why...but I don't think she should be mad at him for some reason. He went through all this apparent trouble to see her and be with her and go to her school, just to be with her, and she's mad at him... But that's okay. Just makes me want the next chapter even more. Update soon!
16kaika switchedWell, it's been a little over two weeks. I hope you get the next chapter up soon. I don't know what to think of Natalee right now. I don't know why...but I don't think she should be mad at him for some reason. He went through all this apparent trouble to see her and be with her and go to her school, just to be with her, and she's mad at him... But that's okay. Just makes me want the next chapter even more. Update soon!
9/20/2004 c22 DragonsEclipse
Hey! Great chapter! Sorry it took me so long to get to. I'm in college now and it's taking up a lot of my time.
Anyway, Blake might not have meant to do anything with Parker, but that's not how Lee sees it. I feel only slightly bad for Blake. He shouldn't have done what he did. As for Lee, I hope that she can, someday, learn to forgive him.
Update soon! I'm curious to see what'll happen next. ^_^
Hey! Great chapter! Sorry it took me so long to get to. I'm in college now and it's taking up a lot of my time.
Anyway, Blake might not have meant to do anything with Parker, but that's not how Lee sees it. I feel only slightly bad for Blake. He shouldn't have done what he did. As for Lee, I hope that she can, someday, learn to forgive him.
Update soon! I'm curious to see what'll happen next. ^_^
9/5/2004 c22 Lostxwithoutxyou
I just spent the past two hours reading your story and all i can really say is that it's just great! ^_^
The story started out sort of cliche (sorry) but there was something about it that just compelled me to read on! And boy am i glad that I did! The story develops quickly and i can say that the characters develop quickly also.
My favorite characrter by far is Blake! ^_^ i wish he was mine! He's so disturbed and in love and sounds very cute;)hehehe! I love how you built him up to be such an awesome character!
The beginning of your story didn't define it as something special on FP.com but after reading on i can say it's been one of my most enjoyable reads (as well as disturbing! O_O)
Sorry for making this review really long but this story deserves it!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
I just spent the past two hours reading your story and all i can really say is that it's just great! ^_^
The story started out sort of cliche (sorry) but there was something about it that just compelled me to read on! And boy am i glad that I did! The story develops quickly and i can say that the characters develop quickly also.
My favorite characrter by far is Blake! ^_^ i wish he was mine! He's so disturbed and in love and sounds very cute;)hehehe! I love how you built him up to be such an awesome character!
The beginning of your story didn't define it as something special on FP.com but after reading on i can say it's been one of my most enjoyable reads (as well as disturbing! O_O)
Sorry for making this review really long but this story deserves it!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
9/4/2004 c22 28Arayuldawen
oh my goodness. Everything was going so good there, then it was all ruined! Update as soon as possible. Poor Lee, and poor Blake. Star-crossed lovers, like Romeo and Juliet? I hope not, cause we all know how that ended.
~Arayuldawen~
28Arayuldawenoh my goodness. Everything was going so good there, then it was all ruined! Update as soon as possible. Poor Lee, and poor Blake. Star-crossed lovers, like Romeo and Juliet? I hope not, cause we all know how that ended.
~Arayuldawen~
9/4/2004 c8 Lierrey
Heh. Nat + Blake? Nat Blake is the name of the little boy from Little Men.
Heh. Nat + Blake? Nat Blake is the name of the little boy from Little Men.