for Dark Envy5/15/2004 c21 Lemonhead754
woo ho. i really had given up checking for new chapters. oh well, at least you're back now. so update soon and don't wait another few months okay? okay!
woo ho. i really had given up checking for new chapters. oh well, at least you're back now. so update soon and don't wait another few months okay? okay!
2/13/2004 c20 
1miase
Im in shock! This is awesome...it sorta scares me though, cuz im a twin...and its just sorta weird. Hahaha, but its great! Good Job! Keep writing, this is awesome!
Till next time! :)
miase
1miaseIm in shock! This is awesome...it sorta scares me though, cuz im a twin...and its just sorta weird. Hahaha, but its great! Good Job! Keep writing, this is awesome!
Till next time! :)
miase
2/8/2004 c20 28Arayuldawen
aw, poor Natalee, she's going back home for a few days. And Blake, he can't commit suicide, he is such an awesome character. Wow, so many twists. Well, update as soon as you can, this story is so great ^_^ I can't wait.
~Arayuldawen~
28Arayuldawenaw, poor Natalee, she's going back home for a few days. And Blake, he can't commit suicide, he is such an awesome character. Wow, so many twists. Well, update as soon as you can, this story is so great ^_^ I can't wait.
~Arayuldawen~
1/31/2004 c20 16kaika switched
Sorry it took me a year and a half to actually get around to reading this chapter. I've just been so caught up with my new stories, finishing other ones, working and school...yadda yadda, I know. But next time you update, I'll try to read it as soon as I can.
I think I like Parker. Blake needs someone there for him. Keep writing!
16kaika switchedSorry it took me a year and a half to actually get around to reading this chapter. I've just been so caught up with my new stories, finishing other ones, working and school...yadda yadda, I know. But next time you update, I'll try to read it as soon as I can.
I think I like Parker. Blake needs someone there for him. Keep writing!
1/18/2004 c20 38Chavi West-Wind
As strange as it may sound, I hope Monica can learn to be okay. I guess it's not really that she can just learn, but I hope she can learn to live with herself. You know what I mean? Because I'm not even sure I do. *is utterly confused* I like Jake, he's sweet, like Blake is, but I like Blake better. I hope Lee and Blake get back together. And I don't like that one girl, Parker. She sounds like one of those people that does things to get attention and gives people who are serious about that sort of thing a bad name. I know the difference, because I know both kinds of people: those who show people their scars because they want attention, and those who don't care who sees because they just don't give a fuck. Or the people who just don't let anyone see... *shrugs* Oh well...
38Chavi West-WindAs strange as it may sound, I hope Monica can learn to be okay. I guess it's not really that she can just learn, but I hope she can learn to live with herself. You know what I mean? Because I'm not even sure I do. *is utterly confused* I like Jake, he's sweet, like Blake is, but I like Blake better. I hope Lee and Blake get back together. And I don't like that one girl, Parker. She sounds like one of those people that does things to get attention and gives people who are serious about that sort of thing a bad name. I know the difference, because I know both kinds of people: those who show people their scars because they want attention, and those who don't care who sees because they just don't give a fuck. Or the people who just don't let anyone see... *shrugs* Oh well...
1/18/2004 c20 DragonsEclipse
Blake tried to commit suicide? I hope he doesn't try that again. Jake seems nice so far. Well, it's understandable that Natalee's mom is extremely upset and in need of company. Update soon! ^_^
Blake tried to commit suicide? I hope he doesn't try that again. Jake seems nice so far. Well, it's understandable that Natalee's mom is extremely upset and in need of company. Update soon! ^_^
1/17/2004 c20 32Cryptic Insanity
Well, Blake didn't die! YAY
Monica is locked up! YAY!
Jake is cool! YAY!
32Cryptic InsanityWell, Blake didn't die! YAY
Monica is locked up! YAY!
Jake is cool! YAY!
1/16/2004 c20 2inconsequential me
She's going home for the weekend! That means she'll get to see Blake...! Baah, that makes me so incredibly happy. She will see blake, won't she...?
I find it odd that Jake rhymes with Blake. But I like Jake as well. That kind of scares me, because she really shouldn't be able to be with anyone than Blake...However I think i'm really starting to like Jake...
And with Parker...You're making things very complicated. Heh.
Kudos :) Excellent chapter. Look forward to the next one.
2inconsequential meShe's going home for the weekend! That means she'll get to see Blake...! Baah, that makes me so incredibly happy. She will see blake, won't she...?
I find it odd that Jake rhymes with Blake. But I like Jake as well. That kind of scares me, because she really shouldn't be able to be with anyone than Blake...However I think i'm really starting to like Jake...
And with Parker...You're making things very complicated. Heh.
Kudos :) Excellent chapter. Look forward to the next one.
1/16/2004 c20 11Neophrite
Wow. I don't mind at all that you took a while - I myself am experiencing some W.B, so I know how it feels! I like the new character Parker, and even though Natalee and Blake are very right for each other, I don't think I'd be sad if Blake went with Parker, or Natalee with Jake. It's also really great that Monica's gone, even though I'm sure she'll come back in some nightmarish episode. Great writing (again I must say it)! Can't wait to read more!
11NeophriteWow. I don't mind at all that you took a while - I myself am experiencing some W.B, so I know how it feels! I like the new character Parker, and even though Natalee and Blake are very right for each other, I don't think I'd be sad if Blake went with Parker, or Natalee with Jake. It's also really great that Monica's gone, even though I'm sure she'll come back in some nightmarish episode. Great writing (again I must say it)! Can't wait to read more!
1/16/2004 c20 4quotata
different from what i usuaslly read ... -.-; its scraing me... -.-; bu i still like it
4quotatadifferent from what i usuaslly read ... -.-; its scraing me... -.-; bu i still like it
1/15/2004 c20 Writerofascientist
Finally we have the next chapter! Great stuff! I can't wait for the rest!
Finally we have the next chapter! Great stuff! I can't wait for the rest!
1/12/2004 c20 tricklingdust
Oh no, temptation on both sides! O_O GREAT chapter, I was beginning to wonder where you'd gone! Please update whenever you can!
Oh no, temptation on both sides! O_O GREAT chapter, I was beginning to wonder where you'd gone! Please update whenever you can!
1/12/2004 c20 ashley
i really like this stoty. i hope natalee becomes pretty again!
i really like this stoty. i hope natalee becomes pretty again!
1/12/2004 c20 6Nickety
Ah, don't have Jake replace Blake. Only Blake can b Blake, ya know?
Great chapter ... I hope you update soon.
6NicketyAh, don't have Jake replace Blake. Only Blake can b Blake, ya know?
Great chapter ... I hope you update soon.
11/27/2003 c19 goobersprinkle
okay, wow. i cant wait to read more! more.. teeha.
-goob-
okay, wow. i cant wait to read more! more.. teeha.
-goob-