
12/20/2005 c1
3Lastande Song
I love this..its so moving, im emotional so i cry every time i read this..It's so sad i have also lost a pet..*Sighs* Anyway, lovely and so sad..

I love this..its so moving, im emotional so i cry every time i read this..It's so sad i have also lost a pet..*Sighs* Anyway, lovely and so sad..
11/9/2005 c1
17Goddess0
I have read this poem countless times and I must say, of all your cat poems this one is my favorite. It makes me cry every single time because I always imagine this stray cat lying on the sidewalk without a hope in the world.
If you were the one who picked it up I applaud you for your humanity and your sensitivity to life. It really shows what a great person you are. Furthermore, are a spectacular poet who can invoke the deepest emotions in just a few verses. This was a very beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing it,~Oni

I have read this poem countless times and I must say, of all your cat poems this one is my favorite. It makes me cry every single time because I always imagine this stray cat lying on the sidewalk without a hope in the world.
If you were the one who picked it up I applaud you for your humanity and your sensitivity to life. It really shows what a great person you are. Furthermore, are a spectacular poet who can invoke the deepest emotions in just a few verses. This was a very beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing it,~Oni
2/12/2005 c1
9FlamingMorning
That is so sad. But at least Sam is in a better place. Somehow, the title makes the poem even more moving.

That is so sad. But at least Sam is in a better place. Somehow, the title makes the poem even more moving.
11/27/2004 c1 nonchristian
I am not a cat person, but I loved this piece... well written
I am not a cat person, but I loved this piece... well written
7/12/2004 c1 catseyeview
This poem was so very touching...I'm near tears and I don't like to cry. What a beautifully sad eligy for the strays. It is so needed and you brought a very timely, a very humane topic up. May you keep writing on these issues.
This poem was so very touching...I'm near tears and I don't like to cry. What a beautifully sad eligy for the strays. It is so needed and you brought a very timely, a very humane topic up. May you keep writing on these issues.
7/8/2004 c1
19Kat-Renee Kittel
Beautiful memoir for a special soul.
I didn't know the meaning of the word Samhain included the ending and beginning of a circle.
Sam also has origins in Hebrew - "Shmuel," which is two words "Shema" and "El." (Samuel in english) "God has heard." I know that the cries of your Sam were heard as he faith-leaped thru the Window of Light.
(I used to have a cat named Sam. I named my Sam for Sammy Davis, Jr. - Sammy use to like me to read to him. When Sammy disappeared, I found another black cat and named him Jason for 'Jason and the Argonauts.' After Jason died from a car hit and run, he spoke to me and said, "I see Ar-One" [his best friend-cat. She died from kidney failure years ago], and then I watched his light-filled soul body leap thru a diamond shaped window.)
^..^

Beautiful memoir for a special soul.
I didn't know the meaning of the word Samhain included the ending and beginning of a circle.
Sam also has origins in Hebrew - "Shmuel," which is two words "Shema" and "El." (Samuel in english) "God has heard." I know that the cries of your Sam were heard as he faith-leaped thru the Window of Light.
(I used to have a cat named Sam. I named my Sam for Sammy Davis, Jr. - Sammy use to like me to read to him. When Sammy disappeared, I found another black cat and named him Jason for 'Jason and the Argonauts.' After Jason died from a car hit and run, he spoke to me and said, "I see Ar-One" [his best friend-cat. She died from kidney failure years ago], and then I watched his light-filled soul body leap thru a diamond shaped window.)
^..^
7/8/2004 c1 Natasja
Oh, Dear... I cannot stop crying, tears run down my face as I wright this... I have owned five stray cats that I rescued from a certain early death, but this one reminds me of one I could not save, a little happy gray kitten that my mother couldn't take in.
I can't even forgive her today, 15 years after...
Well... The poem was very moving, a suggestion is that you put it up wherever you can where pepole can see it to prevent the spreading of stray cats, to make people adopt cats in a larger scale.
PS. I will light a candle for Sam this Samhain.
Love
Oh, Dear... I cannot stop crying, tears run down my face as I wright this... I have owned five stray cats that I rescued from a certain early death, but this one reminds me of one I could not save, a little happy gray kitten that my mother couldn't take in.
I can't even forgive her today, 15 years after...
Well... The poem was very moving, a suggestion is that you put it up wherever you can where pepole can see it to prevent the spreading of stray cats, to make people adopt cats in a larger scale.
PS. I will light a candle for Sam this Samhain.
Love
7/1/2004 c1 Person
May Sam, when the cycle brings his soul to a new life be born to a cat who's caretakers (as cats can't be owned) be as loving to him all though his life as you were at the end.
May Sam, when the cycle brings his soul to a new life be born to a cat who's caretakers (as cats can't be owned) be as loving to him all though his life as you were at the end.
2/16/2004 c1
15Vernie
That was a truly beautiful poem...and this might sound strange but I really think you captured the POV of a cat. It flowed beautifully, it was inspiring yet it was heart-breaking at the same time. I'm sorry for your loss. I wrote a little poem about my cat that passed a few months back. I found him at the park, and now I truly miss him eventhough I only had him for a few months. Anyways, I really enjoyed this poem a lot. You are a great writer. I'm adding this poem to my favs. And keep writing! =)

That was a truly beautiful poem...and this might sound strange but I really think you captured the POV of a cat. It flowed beautifully, it was inspiring yet it was heart-breaking at the same time. I'm sorry for your loss. I wrote a little poem about my cat that passed a few months back. I found him at the park, and now I truly miss him eventhough I only had him for a few months. Anyways, I really enjoyed this poem a lot. You are a great writer. I'm adding this poem to my favs. And keep writing! =)
12/24/2003 c1 Butterfly Radcliffe
That was very pretty and inspiring. I like how you gave real human feelings to a cat, and made people feel its pain. Great job.
~God Bless
That was very pretty and inspiring. I like how you gave real human feelings to a cat, and made people feel its pain. Great job.
~God Bless
11/27/2003 c1
43lronMaiden
aw...that was o sad! i almost cried...That was a beautiful poem… I loved it – it’s excellent! Great flow, rhythm and choice of words, keep it up!
Ps. Pls review some of my own wok if you get the chance…thanx

aw...that was o sad! i almost cried...That was a beautiful poem… I loved it – it’s excellent! Great flow, rhythm and choice of words, keep it up!
Ps. Pls review some of my own wok if you get the chance…thanx
9/26/2003 c1
47Anjeni Windsinger
Oh, wow... This is such a heart-breaking poem. Amazing and beautiful piece... The last line of the second stanza was my favorite.
I just realized that I've read this before, a long time ago. Funny that I find it again after all this time. Anyways, thanks for your review, and keep writing.

Oh, wow... This is such a heart-breaking poem. Amazing and beautiful piece... The last line of the second stanza was my favorite.
I just realized that I've read this before, a long time ago. Funny that I find it again after all this time. Anyways, thanks for your review, and keep writing.
9/3/2003 c1
22Unfinished Author
Another moving poem. Really touching, and your realisation at the end was amazing, it's strange when things like that happen isn't it?

Another moving poem. Really touching, and your realisation at the end was amazing, it's strange when things like that happen isn't it?