for Sweet Dreams1/6/2003 c3 
27Daroga's Rainy Daae
Wow, this is great! I'm reviewing it at chapter three cause I dun have more time to read this, my sis wants da compy! That's just too bad, this was really interesting, too. I'll be sure to read more later, though - good job on this! :) :) :) :) :) :)
27Daroga's Rainy DaaeWow, this is great! I'm reviewing it at chapter three cause I dun have more time to read this, my sis wants da compy! That's just too bad, this was really interesting, too. I'll be sure to read more later, though - good job on this! :) :) :) :) :) :)
11/28/2002 c7 8Noel
Hey Juliette! I just read your story, it was really good. Great ending, definitely not what i expected. Great job!
8NoelHey Juliette! I just read your story, it was really good. Great ending, definitely not what i expected. Great job!
11/17/2002 c7 Megara
OMG! That is an awesome story. I loved it! you are such a great writer.
OMG! That is an awesome story. I loved it! you are such a great writer.
11/9/2002 c7 2SweetFallenAngel
I loved the ending! that was good! u should write a sequel, i g2g oh yeah *throws orange skittles back* I don't like these! bye!
2SweetFallenAngelI loved the ending! that was good! u should write a sequel, i g2g oh yeah *throws orange skittles back* I don't like these! bye!
10/30/2002 c6 16kaika switched
Geez, you had to end it there, didn't you? Well, great story, I hope you update soon!
16kaika switchedGeez, you had to end it there, didn't you? Well, great story, I hope you update soon!
10/22/2002 c6 1Phantom of the Basement
Oh. My. Gosh. You must update this or I'll go nuts! WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN? I'd love to see where you're going with this story!
~Phantom of the Basement~
1Phantom of the BasementOh. My. Gosh. You must update this or I'll go nuts! WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN? I'd love to see where you're going with this story!
~Phantom of the Basement~
10/18/2002 c1 51Punky Poet
Hey! good job! i luv it! dont listen to the stupid bastards who say it sux, cuz it rox! i luv it! hurry and keep writing!
51Punky PoetHey! good job! i luv it! dont listen to the stupid bastards who say it sux, cuz it rox! i luv it! hurry and keep writing!
10/15/2002 c1 Juliette
Hey guess what you guys! I wrote the whole story to turn in for an English assignment, (I had to edit alot of it, but its okay, it's finished!) and my teacher said it was awesome, woohoo! LOL. So, I was wondering if you all want me to put up the new edited version of this story, just let me know! :D
Hey guess what you guys! I wrote the whole story to turn in for an English assignment, (I had to edit alot of it, but its okay, it's finished!) and my teacher said it was awesome, woohoo! LOL. So, I was wondering if you all want me to put up the new edited version of this story, just let me know! :D
9/22/2002 c1 inspiring-writer
Ooh, it's actually starting to freak me out! :P And I like how you broke it up more, it's a really cool story!
Ooh, it's actually starting to freak me out! :P And I like how you broke it up more, it's a really cool story!
9/22/2002 c6 ChasityGarn
Your story is very well written, but as you said, very short. If you make them longer, people might want more of what you have in your head. You sound creative enough to make it drag on a little longer, but not killing the interest totally. Be more descriptive also. Tell me what the charaters' features are! Keep on writing! I like your talent!
Your story is very well written, but as you said, very short. If you make them longer, people might want more of what you have in your head. You sound creative enough to make it drag on a little longer, but not killing the interest totally. Be more descriptive also. Tell me what the charaters' features are! Keep on writing! I like your talent!
9/20/2002 c6 17arieda
wow..another powerful chapter. just one suggestion...write more soon! the suspense is killing me! *holds up slege hammer* write more soon! *arieda begins hitting things in her room, although her room starts to look better*
write more soon ;)
17ariedawow..another powerful chapter. just one suggestion...write more soon! the suspense is killing me! *holds up slege hammer* write more soon! *arieda begins hitting things in her room, although her room starts to look better*
write more soon ;)
9/20/2002 c6 1solitary child
Well written and suspenseful though the first chapter was so-so. Keep up the good work!
1solitary childWell written and suspenseful though the first chapter was so-so. Keep up the good work!