for Cinderella Boy3/7/2010 c4 zombiemoonbeam
So, I read the beginning chapter and the first chapter and became HOOKED nearly immediatly. I think you should update this as soon as you can!
So, I read the beginning chapter and the first chapter and became HOOKED nearly immediatly. I think you should update this as soon as you can!
7/17/2009 c4 
3I Quoth Nevermore
I can't wait to read more about Jack! Oh man. I'm swooning just thinking about him. Update soon!
3I Quoth NevermoreI can't wait to read more about Jack! Oh man. I'm swooning just thinking about him. Update soon!
7/16/2009 c4 6EmmaWoodhouse88
That was so funny! Poor girl though with a Mother like that! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
6EmmaWoodhouse88That was so funny! Poor girl though with a Mother like that! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
7/13/2009 c3 3I Quoth Nevermore
Oh, Jack. me likey. This is just too good. Love the realistic interactions, the unique characters, and the exciting plot. You are awesome. Update soon!
3I Quoth NevermoreOh, Jack. me likey. This is just too good. Love the realistic interactions, the unique characters, and the exciting plot. You are awesome. Update soon!
7/8/2009 c3 6EmmaWoodhouse88
Is that Jack from the first chapter? Also is it the person who tucked her in at the party? I can't wait for the next chapter!
6EmmaWoodhouse88Is that Jack from the first chapter? Also is it the person who tucked her in at the party? I can't wait for the next chapter!
6/6/2009 c1 Matt Stockalper
Intriguing! Wish I could turn the page on this one...
So is her name Evie or Genny? Did I miss something? Just a little thrown by names, that's all. Had to reread to get them down. Jasmine was clear, and it's cool not to know the narrator's name till later when it's mentioned in dialogue.
Concerning the two brothers: I can't yet distinguish the two without memorizing the names. Are they important? I suppose I will find out.
Keep up the good work. I'll be reading your stuff.
Intriguing! Wish I could turn the page on this one...
So is her name Evie or Genny? Did I miss something? Just a little thrown by names, that's all. Had to reread to get them down. Jasmine was clear, and it's cool not to know the narrator's name till later when it's mentioned in dialogue.
Concerning the two brothers: I can't yet distinguish the two without memorizing the names. Are they important? I suppose I will find out.
Keep up the good work. I'll be reading your stuff.
5/26/2009 c2 EmmaWoodhouse88
This seems like a cool story, I can't wait for the next chapeter... Just don't wait another 6 or 7 years to write it. :D
This seems like a cool story, I can't wait for the next chapeter... Just don't wait another 6 or 7 years to write it. :D
5/26/2009 c2 3I Quoth Nevermore
Ooh, it's so good! I just love this. Haha. The little cliffhanger at the end was awesome. And I can't wait for more. How dare you not update for seven years! (Not that I read it back when it was first published. . . ) Just don't do it again, cause it's bloody brilliant now and I want more. Please?
3I Quoth NevermoreOoh, it's so good! I just love this. Haha. The little cliffhanger at the end was awesome. And I can't wait for more. How dare you not update for seven years! (Not that I read it back when it was first published. . . ) Just don't do it again, cause it's bloody brilliant now and I want more. Please?
6/17/2004 c2 2Silver Lily22
Okay, this story is turning out great so far but I do think you should tell the readers who is telling the story. It's kind of hard to tell. So maybe stick to one POV per chapter and title the chapter with that person's name or put headings within the chapters to let us know when you switch and who's speaking now. Other than that, great job! Oh, but please update!
2Silver Lily22Okay, this story is turning out great so far but I do think you should tell the readers who is telling the story. It's kind of hard to tell. So maybe stick to one POV per chapter and title the chapter with that person's name or put headings within the chapters to let us know when you switch and who's speaking now. Other than that, great job! Oh, but please update!
7/9/2003 c2 1Katy Keene
Holy man i know this is probably really old since it's on page 33 but why didn't you write more?
1Katy KeeneHoly man i know this is probably really old since it's on page 33 but why didn't you write more?
8/25/2002 c2 elle
Okay, ur writing absolutly rox, I really do not think I have seen better! I mean really you totally are doing the writing thing great. Keep it up! ;)
Okay, ur writing absolutly rox, I really do not think I have seen better! I mean really you totally are doing the writing thing great. Keep it up! ;)
8/8/2002 c2 KittyWhiskers
mOST iNFINITLY faBULOUS! we are quite pleased with the progressing story so far.
mOST iNFINITLY faBULOUS! we are quite pleased with the progressing story so far.