
6/8/2006 c1
8nostalgicEXPLOSION
I clearly enjoyed reading this. It's charming and the conversation is funny.

I clearly enjoyed reading this. It's charming and the conversation is funny.
5/21/2005 c1
1DuchessYappingDog
This story is so cute. I love it. It's a bit like His Phenomenal Eyes. It gives me that fuzzy feeling. Ah. Contentness.

This story is so cute. I love it. It's a bit like His Phenomenal Eyes. It gives me that fuzzy feeling. Ah. Contentness.
5/17/2004 c1
3Raine Solo
*applauds you*
Whee! :) You were right. YOu sure got a lot of reviews for this one, and I'm not surprised why. Your work is great and I'd like to see more of it ;)

*applauds you*
Whee! :) You were right. YOu sure got a lot of reviews for this one, and I'm not surprised why. Your work is great and I'd like to see more of it ;)
4/11/2004 c1
13Faded Soulfire
This was very sweet. The way you've captured two people's disability and turned in into this kinda love story. It was definitely cute and I'm glad I had the chance to read it!
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Faded Soulfire

This was very sweet. The way you've captured two people's disability and turned in into this kinda love story. It was definitely cute and I'm glad I had the chance to read it!
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Faded Soulfire
2/27/2003 c1 Zephelia
Cute fic.
Cute fic.
2/2/2003 c1 A Thousand Folded Cranes
This story is absolutely beautiful! You are one very talented writer.
This story is absolutely beautiful! You are one very talented writer.
1/29/2003 c1
37Behind Hidden Doors
Very nice! I heard about this from Absolute0, he said it was cute. I can't help but agree with him. It has a nice subtle cuteness to it, and i especially like the ending. it came unexpectedly. I'm putting this in my favorites list. it's very nice. And i like the title, and the concepts, and every shade in between. Wonderful story. keep up!

Very nice! I heard about this from Absolute0, he said it was cute. I can't help but agree with him. It has a nice subtle cuteness to it, and i especially like the ending. it came unexpectedly. I'm putting this in my favorites list. it's very nice. And i like the title, and the concepts, and every shade in between. Wonderful story. keep up!
1/29/2003 c1
3PeachPawz
Great writing! You really got into the personality of the characters. Wonderfully written, with a beautiful ending. I've added it to my favourites. Keep it up!
~Peach

Great writing! You really got into the personality of the characters. Wonderfully written, with a beautiful ending. I've added it to my favourites. Keep it up!
~Peach
1/29/2003 c1
53absolute0
This is absolutely wonderful! I can't help but smile (and laugh) at all those amusing parts. This sure is one nice, smart piece. Love is colorblind... that was unexpected. =) Once again, a brilliant work. Keep up!

This is absolutely wonderful! I can't help but smile (and laugh) at all those amusing parts. This sure is one nice, smart piece. Love is colorblind... that was unexpected. =) Once again, a brilliant work. Keep up!
12/16/2002 c1 EvilImp
I would just like to say this was the best short story I've ever read on this site.I found it though the 'reality check' column, I think the little corrections K'Aurther made would make the story even better! I would have to say my favourite part was the interaction between the two characters and the way the whole thing worked out. exelant!
I would also like to say that some of these people who review and critisise (i cant spell) should know what there talking about I mean I failed english but I still know that it's a new paragraph for a new speaker
- a gold star to you rogue
zerabeth
I would just like to say this was the best short story I've ever read on this site.I found it though the 'reality check' column, I think the little corrections K'Aurther made would make the story even better! I would have to say my favourite part was the interaction between the two characters and the way the whole thing worked out. exelant!
I would also like to say that some of these people who review and critisise (i cant spell) should know what there talking about I mean I failed english but I still know that it's a new paragraph for a new speaker
- a gold star to you rogue
zerabeth
12/6/2002 c1 Yui
I really liked this, you should be an author when you grow up! But, some parts got a little confusing. . .But I get confused easily in some fics though, lol. It's just me, I guess. My mom is just a little tiny bit colorblind. I mean, she gets confused with green and blue - and before she's mixed them up slightly. And my grandma (my mom's mom) is a little bit red-orange colorblind. Considence, huh? Write more!
Mia
I really liked this, you should be an author when you grow up! But, some parts got a little confusing. . .But I get confused easily in some fics though, lol. It's just me, I guess. My mom is just a little tiny bit colorblind. I mean, she gets confused with green and blue - and before she's mixed them up slightly. And my grandma (my mom's mom) is a little bit red-orange colorblind. Considence, huh? Write more!
Mia
11/23/2002 c1
3ShellyMoon
Saw this piece on Reality Check and I simply had to come on leave a review. This story was brilliant, from the (obviously) well thought-out dialouge to the heart-warming message you got across. You simply MUST continue writing on fanfiction.net! You have what it takes to be great...
A Friend,
ShellyMoon

Saw this piece on Reality Check and I simply had to come on leave a review. This story was brilliant, from the (obviously) well thought-out dialouge to the heart-warming message you got across. You simply MUST continue writing on fanfiction.net! You have what it takes to be great...
A Friend,
ShellyMoon
11/18/2002 c1
6Blue Peanut
Wow, this is really great! I read about it in one of the columns, and they were right, you've done an excellent job. Diologue is difficult, but you seem to have mastered it. I really like the story line to, it's a sweet story. This is definitely the best thing I've read in a long time, I'll be back!

Wow, this is really great! I read about it in one of the columns, and they were right, you've done an excellent job. Diologue is difficult, but you seem to have mastered it. I really like the story line to, it's a sweet story. This is definitely the best thing I've read in a long time, I'll be back!