for Castles in the Air12/15/2004 c1 
63William G. Thorne
Very nicely done. I love fairy tales, especially Peter Pan and Robin Hood.
~William
63William G. ThorneVery nicely done. I love fairy tales, especially Peter Pan and Robin Hood.
~William
5/22/2004 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
I wrote a poem at one point called castles in the sky, or somesuch...this is infinitely better, although on a different subject. Blah I love your work. I'm going to run out of ways to say this.
~lyv
127godawful teen-angst poetryI wrote a poem at one point called castles in the sky, or somesuch...this is infinitely better, although on a different subject. Blah I love your work. I'm going to run out of ways to say this.
~lyv
3/24/2004 c1 1Safety Canary
Fantastic! It flows so well! I think after reading all the poetry I've read today I might just become a poetry nut... Well, I still can't deny a good fic, however... But I have too many of those to read. It's nice to just read a one-shot poem like this. It was great, btw. I loved it! And I just figured out your pen name is daydream believer backwards... coolness!
'Slayer
1Safety CanaryFantastic! It flows so well! I think after reading all the poetry I've read today I might just become a poetry nut... Well, I still can't deny a good fic, however... But I have too many of those to read. It's nice to just read a one-shot poem like this. It was great, btw. I loved it! And I just figured out your pen name is daydream believer backwards... coolness!
'Slayer
2/17/2004 c1 35pixy-dizzy
Love this! Daydreamers are the only ones who can travel to other worlds in their nightdreams, you know...
uh...did that make sense?
35pixy-dizzyLove this! Daydreamers are the only ones who can travel to other worlds in their nightdreams, you know...
uh...did that make sense?
5/29/2003 c1 greenfroggies
I loved it! I'm not exactly that kinda person but this has everything a good poem should have. Rhythm, rhyme, shape and sincerity!
I loved it! I'm not exactly that kinda person but this has everything a good poem should have. Rhythm, rhyme, shape and sincerity!
5/9/2003 c1 53absolute0
wow! this is a nice poem. i like your style with words and how you made them rhyme. yeah, the rhymes were nice. =)
53absolute0wow! this is a nice poem. i like your style with words and how you made them rhyme. yeah, the rhymes were nice. =)
1/7/2003 c1 soda-cola-pop
Oh my god, this is so beautiful! ^_^ I hope I can write something as nice as this, I mean, with the same soul and depth, and yet, it didn't come out all forced or something... And I so love these lines:
"Ah, daydream believer, but the things we often see
"Are sadly only visions apparent to you and me
"We hide behind our books and thus, we do conceive
"Figments that lie between truth and make-believe.
"Within we exist in our own deep, secret lairs
"No less than monarchs of our castles in the air,
"We hope; we wish; we crave; we thirst; we weave;
"Immersed with our yearnings in the somber land of sleep.
"So go on, daydream believer, paint the heavens with your brush
"Capture the elusive moment of the sun’s first dawning blush,
"For a world so sorely cynical needs some magic of its own
"Dream for all, daydream believer, let your fantasies be known… "
-Warms my heart and soothes my soul... ^_^ This is really beautiful and touching, I apologize for the lack of terms. ^_^ Oh, and just in case I need a lovely poem as an introduction to some story of mine, can I use this, with your consent I mean. ^_^ I'll gladly tell everyone who the brilliant mind behind this! ^_^
Oh my god, this is so beautiful! ^_^ I hope I can write something as nice as this, I mean, with the same soul and depth, and yet, it didn't come out all forced or something... And I so love these lines:
"Ah, daydream believer, but the things we often see
"Are sadly only visions apparent to you and me
"We hide behind our books and thus, we do conceive
"Figments that lie between truth and make-believe.
"Within we exist in our own deep, secret lairs
"No less than monarchs of our castles in the air,
"We hope; we wish; we crave; we thirst; we weave;
"Immersed with our yearnings in the somber land of sleep.
"So go on, daydream believer, paint the heavens with your brush
"Capture the elusive moment of the sun’s first dawning blush,
"For a world so sorely cynical needs some magic of its own
"Dream for all, daydream believer, let your fantasies be known… "
-Warms my heart and soothes my soul... ^_^ This is really beautiful and touching, I apologize for the lack of terms. ^_^ Oh, and just in case I need a lovely poem as an introduction to some story of mine, can I use this, with your consent I mean. ^_^ I'll gladly tell everyone who the brilliant mind behind this! ^_^
12/29/2002 c1 Star7
a little angel reading a huge dusty book of fairy tales with words weaving a tapestry of pictures and adventures before an unseeing world. very pretty imagery. and i enjoy the meaning because i find it true to myself. your ending stanza had some vivid descriptions, excellent. and this "a kaleidoscope on clouds" holds a really fascinating picture. i like that idea a lot. one of your best, with imagation as your guide, setting free this pretty world. great.
a little angel reading a huge dusty book of fairy tales with words weaving a tapestry of pictures and adventures before an unseeing world. very pretty imagery. and i enjoy the meaning because i find it true to myself. your ending stanza had some vivid descriptions, excellent. and this "a kaleidoscope on clouds" holds a really fascinating picture. i like that idea a lot. one of your best, with imagation as your guide, setting free this pretty world. great.
12/26/2002 c1 36obsidian katana
wow...great poem! really vivid imagery! i wish i could relate more, but my imagination does not extend very far. well, nice work! keep it up!
36obsidian katanawow...great poem! really vivid imagery! i wish i could relate more, but my imagination does not extend very far. well, nice work! keep it up!
12/22/2002 c1 Deana Bell
If you're a mediocre writer, I must be downright bad. Great job...on everything!
-Jesus Saves-
If you're a mediocre writer, I must be downright bad. Great job...on everything!
-Jesus Saves-
12/19/2002 c1 6Curtis J. Perry
The title made me read it. Good alliteration here yourse;f, looking forward to read more!
Curtis
6Curtis J. PerryThe title made me read it. Good alliteration here yourse;f, looking forward to read more!
Curtis