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6/12/2006 c1 9carlabee
it is quite a sad poem someone crying just so nobody will listen i love how short it is and how it jsut ends with 'her empty life' means the reader has to think about how this persons life will end up great read :)
2/14/2006 c1 7liz BLIZZ
I'm not too sure what to say about this. It doesn't feel right, for some reason. Like a bad omen dressed up as a sheep. It's probably just the font; it's too bold, making you feel like the person is whining. There's also a typo in it: "form" should be "from", I'm pretty sure. I also like imagery in a poem; this lacks any form of it. It's pretty well written, though, to say the least.
7/29/2005 c1 14method acting
Depressing in the manor that it is straigthforward. Inescapibly so. Well-written, dripping angst and emotion. INteresting font choice as wel. I think it takes away from teh general feel, but interesting none the less. I think you could have added more to make this a fuller peice, but lovely job all the same.
10/14/2000 c1 8Crybaby
Deep...I can't say more, there are no words for what I feel.
10/13/2000 c1 5PrincessDrusilla
hi
10/11/2000 c1 Cassandra
I feel like that some times. very depressing but well written with lots of emotion

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