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8/25/2005 c1 25Kurt Nabokov
Sometimes I wish I was someone else... Someone that has never read this poem.

Sincerely,
7/29/2005 c1 14method acting
The last two lines of this peice make absolutly no sense. I don't kow if it is simly lack of grammar...In anycase, the duration of the poem, the mean, the thick of things, very nice. Straightfroward, angsty, but obviously heartfelt. Simple, but it only excetuates the feeling. I have read a lot of poems similar to this, and nothing really made it stand out to me. It is heartfelt, but there was no twist. Longer would have been better. Nice job.
1/17/2001 c1 7Passion
it's kinda short..but it still had "power" to it..great job!

*luv*

Passion
10/13/2000 c1 5PrincessDrusilla
whatever
10/12/2000 c1 Mary-Jo
I love depressed girl poems though I tend to write cheesy ones myself.
10/11/2000 c1 Cassandra
I've felt like that many times. And the poem was almost exactly what i was feeling. I t made me feel not as alone. Thanks

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