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6/30/2013 c1 15Sealgirl101
Whoa. Love this.
12/26/2002 c1 34Starrby
I really like it. It flows very nicely except the last line. I mean, I understand why it's written that way and I know (or think I know) what you want it to mean, but if you look at the rest of the poem there are definate beats and the last line just doesn't follow and seems aukward to me. -Unless that's what you were going for. In which case never mind...

Brilliant all the same!

~Starry
9/8/2002 c1 12FattyButt
ahhhhhh...Takes me back to highschool, to that special someone you have a crush on, but he just doesn't know you exist...two different clicks you belong. Well, that's just what I got out of it. Great job once again.!
8/29/2002 c1 Trudy Marazzi
Awwwwww!

Katie, how is it you write such beautiful poems, brilliant fics, touching stories and intreguing novels?

your so goddamn fab gurl!

keep it up!

Trudy xx
8/10/2002 c1 BB9
OMG! u didnt just write that? that was the most fabbest bit of poetry iv ever read kat! this is well good! i love the rhythum! now y cant we study kat poems in skool then crappy other 1's!

Kat u shld write more poetry! tis so much better then mine!

a1 hugs

luv Hayley (BB) and Louise (mark-mad)
8/9/2002 c1 idontwriteherenomore
Ohhhh Man... I so envy you... here I am... been writing poetry since before I could talk and then you just do like that and you make a perfect one like this! You are talented darling. It's a very sweet and kinda searching poem... really good and you should write more!

Love Elisabeth
8/7/2002 c1 7mango surprise
awwwwww hunny, that was a really really beautiful poem! so... searching, i think the word is.

so lonely too, tho; kinda like unrequited love.

awwwww hun, i love it, was really special to write, so don't worry!

all my love darling

Kate

xxxxxx
8/7/2002 c1 Chloe20
awwwwwwwwwwww that was dead cute! and it rhymed without sounding forced which was great! Yes, me liked, and poetry is so hard to do, so BIG, HUGE thumbs up to you!

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