for A Walk in the Sky8/23/2003 c1 thisisover
wow...wow. God. I would pick out some lines that i liked, but that'd be unfair to all the other great ones!
wow...wow. God. I would pick out some lines that i liked, but that'd be unfair to all the other great ones!
4/30/2003 c1 
34Wasted Postage
This was a wonderful poem. I don't think it is pure rambling, but rather beautiful. good work.
34Wasted PostageThis was a wonderful poem. I don't think it is pure rambling, but rather beautiful. good work.
4/20/2003 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
gorgeous...wow. Great imagery, such a...er...for lack of better word, 'poetic' style. (i know it's a poem, but hey.)
You're an amazing author-keep writing.
-Beth
127godawful teen-angst poetrygorgeous...wow. Great imagery, such a...er...for lack of better word, 'poetic' style. (i know it's a poem, but hey.)
You're an amazing author-keep writing.
-Beth
4/16/2003 c1 6Linmenel
Beautiful beautiful beautiful. I've really nothing more to say :P. Perfect if I say so myself
6LinmenelBeautiful beautiful beautiful. I've really nothing more to say :P. Perfect if I say so myself
3/22/2003 c1 24Lux's Confusion
god this was goregeous, i was in a trance pulled closer and closer to the computer screen and... ok snap out of it! lol
seriously awesome portrayal of nature and sensory. well done is my humble opinion.
Jasmine
24Lux's Confusiongod this was goregeous, i was in a trance pulled closer and closer to the computer screen and... ok snap out of it! lol
seriously awesome portrayal of nature and sensory. well done is my humble opinion.
Jasmine
12/12/2002 c1 90SweetGrape
But it's such pretty rambling;)
Beautiful images and descriptions give me a picture even though I've never been to Lake Tahoe.
'its wind-blown lashed flashing gracefully in mesmerizing sunbeams' nice metaphor.
Silly thing to say about a poem, but this very poetic:) Lots of strong, vivid imagery.
'framed in crazed waves around a radiant face' great idea!:)
This piece is soothing and calming, but also wind-blown and exciting so that's a beautiful aspect of it.
'if you have never submitted your soul into the simplicity of pure magic' beautiful! Pure, wondrous message told in a pure, wondrous way (which is probably best;)
Entrancing and stunning the whole way through with the final lines ending it nicely.
90SweetGrapeBut it's such pretty rambling;)
Beautiful images and descriptions give me a picture even though I've never been to Lake Tahoe.
'its wind-blown lashed flashing gracefully in mesmerizing sunbeams' nice metaphor.
Silly thing to say about a poem, but this very poetic:) Lots of strong, vivid imagery.
'framed in crazed waves around a radiant face' great idea!:)
This piece is soothing and calming, but also wind-blown and exciting so that's a beautiful aspect of it.
'if you have never submitted your soul into the simplicity of pure magic' beautiful! Pure, wondrous message told in a pure, wondrous way (which is probably best;)
Entrancing and stunning the whole way through with the final lines ending it nicely.
11/21/2002 c1 16Girl With Hat
Wow~ a poet to rival Unuspai (Unu-san being one of my fave authors ever). This is spectacular!
16Girl With HatWow~ a poet to rival Unuspai (Unu-san being one of my fave authors ever). This is spectacular!
11/8/2002 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
Absolutely beautiful! I love how you've written this poem. I can see how Lake Tahoe inspired this one. Keep writing.~CT
43Carter TachikawaAbsolutely beautiful! I love how you've written this poem. I can see how Lake Tahoe inspired this one. Keep writing.~CT
8/28/2002 c1 34miss meaningeverythingtome
Lake Tahoe is so beautiful. I was near there this summer. Your poem is a great description; beautiful images, and thoughtprovoking as well. :)
34miss meaningeverythingtomeLake Tahoe is so beautiful. I was near there this summer. Your poem is a great description; beautiful images, and thoughtprovoking as well. :)