for Sometimes I Wonder...7/16/2004 c1 
139Raven-ember
This is a good poem! I also write poetry and thought it looked cool this way!
139Raven-emberThis is a good poem! I also write poetry and thought it looked cool this way!
4/1/2003 c1 Hele
It's good, although maybe you should break up your lines a little? It seems kinda overwhelming to just read through this without going to any new lines. The writing conveys the emotions involved very well.
It's good, although maybe you should break up your lines a little? It seems kinda overwhelming to just read through this without going to any new lines. The writing conveys the emotions involved very well.
3/24/2003 c1 5Adam Evans
Hey... look, I'm reviewing my own poem! lol. no, that's not why I'm writing this. I just wanted to let anybody who reads this know that I'm not stupid and I realize that this poem needs spacing but FP.Net fucked it up and I've tried re-uploading it many times... and it never helps. Just thought I'd let you guys know.
5Adam EvansHey... look, I'm reviewing my own poem! lol. no, that's not why I'm writing this. I just wanted to let anybody who reads this know that I'm not stupid and I realize that this poem needs spacing but FP.Net fucked it up and I've tried re-uploading it many times... and it never helps. Just thought I'd let you guys know.
3/24/2003 c1 14Single and Fabulous
Thanks so much for the review! This poem is very interesting. I've been such a slaker, I've written all the way up to chapter 11 in Life, I just don't have them typed yet. Chapter 7 is up!
14Single and FabulousThanks so much for the review! This poem is very interesting. I've been such a slaker, I've written all the way up to chapter 11 in Life, I just don't have them typed yet. Chapter 7 is up!
3/18/2003 c1 8PaperLanterns
very well written and poetic. i think that a lot of people struggle with that same kind of thing. i think regret is one of the worst feelings in the world, but the way you wrote it put it exactly into words. well done, and EXCELLENT last line. "dream world with a reality ending" i'll have to remember that one
8PaperLanternsvery well written and poetic. i think that a lot of people struggle with that same kind of thing. i think regret is one of the worst feelings in the world, but the way you wrote it put it exactly into words. well done, and EXCELLENT last line. "dream world with a reality ending" i'll have to remember that one
2/9/2003 c1 Wotcha
This is really good, but maybe you should separate the lines to make it easier to read.
This is really good, but maybe you should separate the lines to make it easier to read.