5/14/2004 c1 Fargalas
I like it. it's cool. thanks for writing it in the first place. I just found this in the quick picks section, but it was good. keep writing!
I like it. it's cool. thanks for writing it in the first place. I just found this in the quick picks section, but it was good. keep writing!
11/2/2000 c1 11KittyKMae
It isn't bad. I'd like it better if that last line was a little different. Like, for example, a ? instead of a period (that's just me, stuff like that bugs me almost more than messed-up plot/storyline/whatever poems have). But other than that, it's great. It's true too, how much people have to hide. Anyways, this is pretty good.
It isn't bad. I'd like it better if that last line was a little different. Like, for example, a ? instead of a period (that's just me, stuff like that bugs me almost more than messed-up plot/storyline/whatever poems have). But other than that, it's great. It's true too, how much people have to hide. Anyways, this is pretty good.
10/11/2000 c1 Tanzy
That's nice Candie. And it is way to true
That's nice Candie. And it is way to true
10/11/2000 c1 Johnathan
I like it. It's got kind of a mysterious feel to it. Also, It's kind of sad that you don't show these things to whoever. It's good.
I like it. It's got kind of a mysterious feel to it. Also, It's kind of sad that you don't show these things to whoever. It's good.