Reviews: a prince's bride to be

7/10/2003 c1 FruitLoopWAttitude
Neat, completly different approach from the rest of your poems. I like it. Sad ending though, but welcome to real life. Keep writing!

1/27/2003 c1 hoku the dragon
wow...that was good...i liked it ...you should listen to your little brother more often!=)

hoku

8/11/2002 c1

39squeak
this poem is so good! sad, but good. i like teh pattern you used. that was neat. i really liked it. ciao

-jessie=)

8/10/2002 c1

24Misplaced Innocence
That's really good. It's bittersweet.