for Un-"Perfect" Me9/25/2009 c1 Zoe
Grammar much? Clean up your story, or no one will read it.
Grammar much? Clean up your story, or no one will read it.
6/17/2003 c10 
1Freakage
Aw...this story is so sweet! I love happy endings too! Love the story, love the characters. Great job!
1FreakageAw...this story is so sweet! I love happy endings too! Love the story, love the characters. Great job!
12/24/2002 c10 3SKACHICK
hey! great story! i liked it...including the cheesy ending! lol, what ever happened to andy? u should make a sequal...MERRY CHRISTMAS!
3SKACHICKhey! great story! i liked it...including the cheesy ending! lol, what ever happened to andy? u should make a sequal...MERRY CHRISTMAS!
9/26/2002 c10 2cbprice25
this story ROCKS! i think that basically says it all so i will leave now before i say something totally confussing, which i am known for.
2cbprice25this story ROCKS! i think that basically says it all so i will leave now before i say something totally confussing, which i am known for.
9/26/2002 c8 cbprice25
oh, i've been waiting for something like that, but you did surprise me! you surprised me but it's a good surprise. now i will leave so i can read more
oh, i've been waiting for something like that, but you did surprise me! you surprised me but it's a good surprise. now i will leave so i can read more
9/26/2002 c1 cbprice25
you're on my favorites, but i'm not gonna type more 'cause i want to continue reading so, bye-bye!
you're on my favorites, but i'm not gonna type more 'cause i want to continue reading so, bye-bye!
9/21/2002 c9 2inconsequential me
Awww, cute boy! lol, sooooooo...do you havea boy? You should! lol, i want one...
anyway, great chapter! love this story. just so darn adorable. nah, but seriously, it's great! i love reading it. and guess what? i did update! so hah! anyway, thanks for writing an amazing story in which i lvoe to read! whoohoo! go you. lol.
2inconsequential meAwww, cute boy! lol, sooooooo...do you havea boy? You should! lol, i want one...
anyway, great chapter! love this story. just so darn adorable. nah, but seriously, it's great! i love reading it. and guess what? i did update! so hah! anyway, thanks for writing an amazing story in which i lvoe to read! whoohoo! go you. lol.
9/19/2002 c9 RANDOM PERSON
Welp, seems i'm behind on the reviewing. Darn. Naw just kidding. Anyway, still with those Doves:D hehehehehehehe okay i am scaring myself now. anyway, do ya have to have so much mushy stuff? yuck. blood, guts, gore. jk grrrr, i'm gonna go i am scaring myself too much, later days
Welp, seems i'm behind on the reviewing. Darn. Naw just kidding. Anyway, still with those Doves:D hehehehehehehe okay i am scaring myself now. anyway, do ya have to have so much mushy stuff? yuck. blood, guts, gore. jk grrrr, i'm gonna go i am scaring myself too much, later days
9/19/2002 c8 RANDOM PERSON
Well, i didn't hurt myself this time, but I am hyper off of those little Dove miniatures. They are sooooooooooo good. I'm a choco-holic. There I admited it. Happy now Brek? Sorry Brek is the little angel on my shoulder. Hopefully you won't have to meet Crim (he's the littled horned annoying buzzing thing:)) JK Anways, I really LOVE your story [and I had to retype love about twenty times, i can't type tonight]. Welp I bet this review was interesting. TTYL:D
Well, i didn't hurt myself this time, but I am hyper off of those little Dove miniatures. They are sooooooooooo good. I'm a choco-holic. There I admited it. Happy now Brek? Sorry Brek is the little angel on my shoulder. Hopefully you won't have to meet Crim (he's the littled horned annoying buzzing thing:)) JK Anways, I really LOVE your story [and I had to retype love about twenty times, i can't type tonight]. Welp I bet this review was interesting. TTYL:D
9/19/2002 c9 15Jessie L. Star - AKA star123
EEP, sorry didn't mean to confuse you that is just where I learnt about the purple hearts thing. One of the actors in Band of Brothers is Ross out of friends. Never mind! Thanks for wishing me a happy belated birthday..now on to the review. OMG that was so fantastic! It was seriously the cutest thing ever. They're finally a couple!YAY! You are such a talented author and when you've finished this one you have to write anohter...I'll review heaps on that one too, I promise!I can't believe next chapter is going to be the last...sniff, sniff. Anyway I'm sure it'll be great like the rest of this story. Update fast!
15Jessie L. Star - AKA star123EEP, sorry didn't mean to confuse you that is just where I learnt about the purple hearts thing. One of the actors in Band of Brothers is Ross out of friends. Never mind! Thanks for wishing me a happy belated birthday..now on to the review. OMG that was so fantastic! It was seriously the cutest thing ever. They're finally a couple!YAY! You are such a talented author and when you've finished this one you have to write anohter...I'll review heaps on that one too, I promise!I can't believe next chapter is going to be the last...sniff, sniff. Anyway I'm sure it'll be great like the rest of this story. Update fast!
9/14/2002 c8 2inconsequential me
Awww...Tear. That was sad. made me want to cry. You did a good job expressing their emotions :) Definitely cute.
I like both of their stubborness :) it was cute. I'm glad things worked out! yayness!
I'm sad that it'll only be a couple more chapters long :( That's not fun...Oh well. I'm glad it got this far! Ten is a nice number to settle on. Kudos! Great job.
2inconsequential meAwww...Tear. That was sad. made me want to cry. You did a good job expressing their emotions :) Definitely cute.
I like both of their stubborness :) it was cute. I'm glad things worked out! yayness!
I'm sad that it'll only be a couple more chapters long :( That's not fun...Oh well. I'm glad it got this far! Ten is a nice number to settle on. Kudos! Great job.
9/13/2002 c8 15Jessie L. Star - AKA star123
Purple Heart...hmmm Band of Brothers? It has only just started here in Australia I still can't get over Ross being so mean...anyway getting side-tracked! This chapter was so cute but Nick was being so stubborn and not looking at her. Mean Nick! I'm glad this is going to go on for longer because it is seriously very good! A personal gift for me? Well it was my birthday last week! Alright Ciao and good work as usual!
15Jessie L. Star - AKA star123Purple Heart...hmmm Band of Brothers? It has only just started here in Australia I still can't get over Ross being so mean...anyway getting side-tracked! This chapter was so cute but Nick was being so stubborn and not looking at her. Mean Nick! I'm glad this is going to go on for longer because it is seriously very good! A personal gift for me? Well it was my birthday last week! Alright Ciao and good work as usual!