for A Fleeting Dream8/13/2002 c1 
2Namek Kaia
Great job on this! DPS is one of the better movies I've seen. You pegged Neil's thoughts pretty well. I can imagine him thinking all this in his head the night they made him come home. I thought that part of the movie was so sad and tragic. Anyways! Good job... wanna see more of this stuff from ya!
2Namek KaiaGreat job on this! DPS is one of the better movies I've seen. You pegged Neil's thoughts pretty well. I can imagine him thinking all this in his head the night they made him come home. I thought that part of the movie was so sad and tragic. Anyways! Good job... wanna see more of this stuff from ya!
8/13/2002 c1 38Pearlescense
wow that was cool.. i have no idea who youre talking about but i really like the poem.. its good.. expresses a lot of things im going through or have gone through.. and the things that i havent gone through in here i feel like i have from reading it.. wow thats amazing.. kudos to you! keep writing
38Pearlescensewow that was cool.. i have no idea who youre talking about but i really like the poem.. its good.. expresses a lot of things im going through or have gone through.. and the things that i havent gone through in here i feel like i have from reading it.. wow thats amazing.. kudos to you! keep writing