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4/1/2003 c1 26GoddessofBlue
*dies* more beautiful poetry. *evil look* i'm jealous... wish i could write that nicely :-P but i can't so *shrugs* anyway... i liked that.. it really hit me... something i can relate to. if i just made sense.
2/26/2003 c1 LazyDaze06
awesome fucking poem. angsty shit iz the best.
12/8/2002 c1 1Valimalirit
I like it a lot! I get what the person in this story is talking about.
12/3/2002 c1 DragonsEclipse
I like this! It's well written and I do understand it. Keep writing! ^_~
11/23/2002 c1 8Purple Colored Auora Petals
I like this one. Poor girl, trying to get help, but no one wants to give it to her.

But if she didn't need help, I'd bet they'd be up there in her ass trying to help her out (don't ask me who 'they' are).

Well...I like this, I don't really have any words for it besides...nice, smooth, and flowing.

Great job, I like it.
11/22/2002 c1 17Jade6
Depression is scary. It sinks its claws into you and you are trapped at its mercy. Not a nice place to be... powerful poem!

Jade
11/6/2002 c1 64Black Tangled Heart
expressive and poignant. i really like it.
10/13/2002 c1 52Princegino
i do understand yt..i feel the same way..i liek it lots! i feel as if even when i scream no1 can hear me (metophoricly)i like lots!
9/7/2002 c1 52Munku-JGSPTV
k0ol poem! I agree with all the other reviewers! I like the part about 'losing time'. Very good. And thank you so much for reviewing my poem! *hugs*

Epitaph Munku-JGSPTV ^_^
9/5/2002 c1 Emily Dark
(too lazy to sign in) I like! tears sticker off her head and gives it to you!
8/29/2002 c1 xurbandecayx
I understand you completely. Like, a lot of people assume that about people with depression, or eating disorders. [Lucky me, I suffer from both]. What they don't understand, is that, the diseases are not always caused from the sake of vanity, but simply psychological disorders, or events in one's life that makes them feel that way. Anyway...

I really like your 'depressing' poetry, sometimes our best efforts come from the 'darker' sides of ourselves. I especially like the line 'She's lost in the darkness'... That was brilliant, even more so for an ending. I really like it, it leaves suspense and hope that she will make it through; that somebody will break through any barriers and save the girl in the tragic situation...
8/26/2002 c1 20monsterbreaker
Wow, that was AMAZING! Hehe, i love depressing poetry, it is such a good way to get rid of your anger! I love it! I'm gonna go read some of ur other stuff...PS: Thanx for the reviews, ur da best!

~me~
8/25/2002 c1 28Arayuldawen
great job.

~Arayuldawen~
8/24/2002 c1 Underneath Society
*closes her eyes for a moment*

I understood this...

How simply beautiful... odd that I call it beautiful, maybe, but it is...
8/20/2002 c1 2Drips on a fern
Wow, occasinally, that sounds like myself
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