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4/11/2004 c1 219Matthew James Current
5/7/2003 c1 4StrawberryChick
Aww! That's so sad!

That's when you know who your real friends are—when they only have to be there to support you. No words, just there.

I like how you just left most of it a mystery, except that they were friends.

Do keep writing!

1/29/2003 c1 146Catella Estelle
okay okay, please don't get overly sad.

This hasn't happened to me. Though this school year it has happened to some of my friends. A junior at my school got in a really bad car accident and lost her sister.

Though I wrote this before then. I don't think I was even at my school yet so didn't even know the person at all. But yeah...something terrible that really follows the lines of this poem did happen at my school and it affected a lot of my friends...
1/29/2003 c1 29Honey Kitten
Awwww I think I'm going to cry. That was so beautiful!
1/24/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
Wow...did your friend turn out okay? That must be hard to experience...

~Heart of the Sword
11/18/2002 c1 5Melusine07
so sad! you're right, it really shouldn't happen..great, now im going to cry
9/7/2002 c1 167E. Hisifithith
Wow! This is so great. Sad, but great. Keep it up!
8/29/2002 c1 4Imania
I hope that never happened to you... you have the ability to put such emotion in your poems.
8/25/2002 c1 6N47R3
the closest thigns to this that have happened to me are when my grandpas, yes both of them, but not at the same time, had a heart attack and surgery.
8/16/2002 c1 7Dog Face
oh wow, that's horrible. I hope that didn't hapen to you, if it did;my best wishes.

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