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1/14/2004 c1 5Yaviewen
Woo... this is unbelievable. And painfull. I'm one of those straight haired people who compliments the curly haired- I winced when I read the part. This is really very well done.
3/8/2003 c1 Karen
I'm really glad you published this one!

How about haveing your authors note as the description adding and taking away obvious parts. Oh AND PLEASE add the rest it would/dose feel/read unfinshed if you didn't.
10/22/2002 c1 32Morbane
I like the way she obsessively goes over her appearance, and there's an effectively bitter tone in the way she describes other people's opinions of her. Well controlled.
10/4/2002 c1 ASNAIL
I think this story shows well the darker side of teenagerhood, how someone's appearance can be taken as their personality for so long that they deliberately go against it, no matter what they wish to be, and the truth about reflections. I like this story. It makes you think, and is very well written in a tense quite hard to use for a long period of time. Very well done.
8/23/2002 c1 1Sick Little Fiend
Oooh. Angst-y. Pretty good, though! You should post that boarding house story, it sounds interesting.
8/21/2002 c1 Sage of Darkness
This really is a great fic, and awesome for you since as I know you dislike short stories. And post the boarding house story! It's good!

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