
3/13/2004 c7
21WiredCrazyFrances
This is really good, I love all of the description. Please please continue!

This is really good, I love all of the description. Please please continue!
8/7/2003 c7 Winter's Roar
OH WOW I LOVE THIS THIS IS PERFECT, MARVELOUS, SO CUTE!
AH hem, sorry about all that, but this is marvelous! I love this, so cute. Um, does he not have school, cuz he's wishing her good luck, but aren't they the same age?
I love all the details you have in this, everything from what they wear to their reactions, to the movies. Wonderfully written!
Um, i would love for some of the chapters to be a little longer, and it would be a little easier to read if everything wasn't in huge paragraphs. If things were broken up a little more, ex if you started a new line whenever something was said, it would be a little easier to follow.
Oh, pls pls pls update this soon! This is wonderful, and they seem so perfect for each other. Friendships are the best place for relationships to start, so this story is brilliant. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon pls!
~ winter
OH WOW I LOVE THIS THIS IS PERFECT, MARVELOUS, SO CUTE!
AH hem, sorry about all that, but this is marvelous! I love this, so cute. Um, does he not have school, cuz he's wishing her good luck, but aren't they the same age?
I love all the details you have in this, everything from what they wear to their reactions, to the movies. Wonderfully written!
Um, i would love for some of the chapters to be a little longer, and it would be a little easier to read if everything wasn't in huge paragraphs. If things were broken up a little more, ex if you started a new line whenever something was said, it would be a little easier to follow.
Oh, pls pls pls update this soon! This is wonderful, and they seem so perfect for each other. Friendships are the best place for relationships to start, so this story is brilliant. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon pls!
~ winter