for It Could Happen To You9/4/2002 c2 
10starsprinkles9604
Get someone to proof read this, but other tahn that, it sounds like a good beginning. It should be interesting to see what developes from this.
10starsprinkles9604Get someone to proof read this, but other tahn that, it sounds like a good beginning. It should be interesting to see what developes from this.
8/19/2002 c1 Alethia
It sounds like a good start to me. It's moving a little quickly, though. You might want to spend more time introducing your characters. And spell-check. Yes. Otherwise, it looks pretty good. It seems to be going somewhere, it has a plot, slight bit of emotion (more will come if you slw the story down).
Oh. And something I noticed when I tried to leave a review. You don't accept anonymous ones. You'll get more reviews if you do. I'd recommend changing that.
It sounds like a good start to me. It's moving a little quickly, though. You might want to spend more time introducing your characters. And spell-check. Yes. Otherwise, it looks pretty good. It seems to be going somewhere, it has a plot, slight bit of emotion (more will come if you slw the story down).
Oh. And something I noticed when I tried to leave a review. You don't accept anonymous ones. You'll get more reviews if you do. I'd recommend changing that.
8/19/2002 c1 24Tara Cools
eek! that dude sounds scary! she's 12 goddamn it!i like where this is going but the only thing that put a dampr into this chapter was that there were a lot of spelling errors etc. but that won't stop me from continuing this! it looks like it will be promising!update soon!
24Tara Coolseek! that dude sounds scary! she's 12 goddamn it!i like where this is going but the only thing that put a dampr into this chapter was that there were a lot of spelling errors etc. but that won't stop me from continuing this! it looks like it will be promising!update soon!