for Chesapeake Bay7/11/2003 c28 beni
this is too good. TOO GODOODOODODOD. how long are you going to make us wait for the next chapter? :D
this is too good. TOO GODOODOODODOD. how long are you going to make us wait for the next chapter? :D
12/14/2002 c28 
6talkingbanana
ack! i missed reviewing a chapter again! sorry! don't chain me to C-3PO! o:-)
great two chapters, as always. i can't wait to see what you do with the ending. not that i want it to end, of course. :)
6talkingbananaack! i missed reviewing a chapter again! sorry! don't chain me to C-3PO! o:-)
great two chapters, as always. i can't wait to see what you do with the ending. not that i want it to end, of course. :)
11/25/2002 c28 1Yodes
Dude! I do not want a bloody scooter! Yes, I do want a Fireblade. But like I said before, my, erm, height problem means I'll just have to settle for a Ninja 600. Oh what a world!
Cool chapter dude, there was actuall smoochies! I do believe that you're taking Dawson's Creek seriously.
Keep it going, update soon. Just don't make them cry.
I'm still considering that Manure comment I made the other day *evil grin*
1YodesDude! I do not want a bloody scooter! Yes, I do want a Fireblade. But like I said before, my, erm, height problem means I'll just have to settle for a Ninja 600. Oh what a world!
Cool chapter dude, there was actuall smoochies! I do believe that you're taking Dawson's Creek seriously.
Keep it going, update soon. Just don't make them cry.
I'm still considering that Manure comment I made the other day *evil grin*
11/24/2002 c28 8Weesil
Oh, wow. Me likes. Me likes indeed. I HOPE this isn't the last chapter. Or you would force me to...to...uh...do something so horribly bad that I don't even know what it is yet!
8WeesilOh, wow. Me likes. Me likes indeed. I HOPE this isn't the last chapter. Or you would force me to...to...uh...do something so horribly bad that I don't even know what it is yet!
11/21/2002 c27 1Yodes
Two more chapters? Only TWO more chapters? This better have a good ending and an even better sequel dude! Not one mention of your nose fettish! Good for you! Update soon!
1YodesTwo more chapters? Only TWO more chapters? This better have a good ending and an even better sequel dude! Not one mention of your nose fettish! Good for you! Update soon!
11/21/2002 c26 Yodes
YES girls can have motorbikes! I'm thinkin about startin a 'Get Yodes A Motorbike' fund. Whatcha think? I mean, I'm not THAT small... Right dude?
I still don't see how the word glowering can make you laugh. It's a BLOODY word for christs sake! Get a grip girl!
Finally, you made her snap (kinda) It took you long enough. Was I too harsh?
YES girls can have motorbikes! I'm thinkin about startin a 'Get Yodes A Motorbike' fund. Whatcha think? I mean, I'm not THAT small... Right dude?
I still don't see how the word glowering can make you laugh. It's a BLOODY word for christs sake! Get a grip girl!
Finally, you made her snap (kinda) It took you long enough. Was I too harsh?
11/18/2002 c27 Jess
Awww, only two more chapters? I love this story, don't end it! I have an idea! Make a whole chapter on Dylan's hair. Then you could make a whole 'nother chapter on his eyes..then...
((P.S. You're a great writer.))
Awww, only two more chapters? I love this story, don't end it! I have an idea! Make a whole chapter on Dylan's hair. Then you could make a whole 'nother chapter on his eyes..then...
((P.S. You're a great writer.))
11/6/2002 c26 6talkingbanana
uh oh i MISSED a chapter! i'm so terribly sorry! will you ever forgive me? o:-)
adie is a JERK! she needs to, like, die or something. or maybe you could bring up the whole star wars thing and handcuff her to C-3PO. you know, the whole torture thing. ;) keep up the good work!
6talkingbananauh oh i MISSED a chapter! i'm so terribly sorry! will you ever forgive me? o:-)
adie is a JERK! she needs to, like, die or something. or maybe you could bring up the whole star wars thing and handcuff her to C-3PO. you know, the whole torture thing. ;) keep up the good work!
10/30/2002 c25 1Yodes
Dude, whatever were you suggesting? the other two people on the other side of a bloody great sheet of metal, hmm...
No good at the romance crap? Yeah, right *rolls eyes* What's with the whole star wars thing anyway? Been watching your videos again?
Not bad chapter, update soon.
The person you based Adie on... is she really that bad?
1YodesDude, whatever were you suggesting? the other two people on the other side of a bloody great sheet of metal, hmm...
No good at the romance crap? Yeah, right *rolls eyes* What's with the whole star wars thing anyway? Been watching your videos again?
Not bad chapter, update soon.
The person you based Adie on... is she really that bad?
10/22/2002 c24 6talkingbanana
ah, yes. guy crying = novelty indeed. cameron seems so sweet, he deserves better than adie. i don't like her too much.
*shrug* you know your story is good when people start talking about the characters like they're real. lol keep it comin'.
6talkingbananaah, yes. guy crying = novelty indeed. cameron seems so sweet, he deserves better than adie. i don't like her too much.
*shrug* you know your story is good when people start talking about the characters like they're real. lol keep it comin'.
10/22/2002 c24 1Yodes
Dude! You made a guy actually cry! *lol* Now THAT is power! Good one!
It isn't Jensen Shackles it's Jensen Ackles! How could you get his name mixed up? I'm gonna have to tease you about a certain someone if you don't quit with that.
yep, I figure Luke getting decked should just about cover the whole revenge thing that needed to be done. But if you want humiliation, I suggest public nudity. Always a scary one. Update soon- I kept to the deal and did mine.
1YodesDude! You made a guy actually cry! *lol* Now THAT is power! Good one!
It isn't Jensen Shackles it's Jensen Ackles! How could you get his name mixed up? I'm gonna have to tease you about a certain someone if you don't quit with that.
yep, I figure Luke getting decked should just about cover the whole revenge thing that needed to be done. But if you want humiliation, I suggest public nudity. Always a scary one. Update soon- I kept to the deal and did mine.
10/21/2002 c23 Yodes
Let's see...what can I say about this chapter? STOP WATCHING DAWSON'S CREEK! I forgive you for the whole Wil thing, just make sure Luke gets what's coming to him, 'kay Dude?
I will not succumb to the sappy side, that would just totally ruin my image. What would you think of me then? Not a bad chapter- more ammo to use against you. Now I'm dreading continuing with my story.
The whole Dave Jnr thing BETTER be a figment of your overactive imagination! I go for guys older than me, and they tend not to want dreadlocks or whatever it is he wants to do with his hair.
Update soon!, like yesterday...
Let's see...what can I say about this chapter? STOP WATCHING DAWSON'S CREEK! I forgive you for the whole Wil thing, just make sure Luke gets what's coming to him, 'kay Dude?
I will not succumb to the sappy side, that would just totally ruin my image. What would you think of me then? Not a bad chapter- more ammo to use against you. Now I'm dreading continuing with my story.
The whole Dave Jnr thing BETTER be a figment of your overactive imagination! I go for guys older than me, and they tend not to want dreadlocks or whatever it is he wants to do with his hair.
Update soon!, like yesterday...
10/21/2002 c23 6talkingbanana
yeah, Will's scary enough fending for herself, but i'm starting to get concerned about Kit and Dylan being left alone. :p
sequel sequel sequel! :)
6talkingbananayeah, Will's scary enough fending for herself, but i'm starting to get concerned about Kit and Dylan being left alone. :p
sequel sequel sequel! :)
10/16/2002 c22 1Yodes
Cool dude, this chapter was pretty funny. Just a few things though:
1) I CAN'T BELIVE YOU'RE LEAVING MY CHARACTER BEHIND!
2) Thanks for putting in my suggestion of kickin' Luke in the balls
3) Someone BETTER kick Luke in the balls
you did say that it was loosely based on me right? Cos there is no chance in hell that I'd fancy Dave Jnr, I wouldn't go soppy over some guy *honest*, and oh yeah, once again- I am NOT a compulsive liar!
Hurry up with the next chapter and I'll try to get my 3rd chapter up too (no matter how pathetic it is.)
1YodesCool dude, this chapter was pretty funny. Just a few things though:
1) I CAN'T BELIVE YOU'RE LEAVING MY CHARACTER BEHIND!
2) Thanks for putting in my suggestion of kickin' Luke in the balls
3) Someone BETTER kick Luke in the balls
you did say that it was loosely based on me right? Cos there is no chance in hell that I'd fancy Dave Jnr, I wouldn't go soppy over some guy *honest*, and oh yeah, once again- I am NOT a compulsive liar!
Hurry up with the next chapter and I'll try to get my 3rd chapter up too (no matter how pathetic it is.)
10/15/2002 c22 6talkingbanana
'course i'm still reading and enjoying. Will's keeping me on my toes here . . . she's been so unpredictable lately I'm surprised she hasn't done something totally random like turn into a cockroach (heh . . . reading Kafka's "The Metamorphosis" in English, that's where that came from).
characters can be stubborn/awkward sometimes, i agree. sometimes you just can't get them to obey your every whim! *sigh* i have one of those in one of my stories right now. he's so frustrating . . .
lol ENOUGH about disobedient characters! i'm glad to hear there's a sequel. keep up the good work!
6talkingbanana'course i'm still reading and enjoying. Will's keeping me on my toes here . . . she's been so unpredictable lately I'm surprised she hasn't done something totally random like turn into a cockroach (heh . . . reading Kafka's "The Metamorphosis" in English, that's where that came from).
characters can be stubborn/awkward sometimes, i agree. sometimes you just can't get them to obey your every whim! *sigh* i have one of those in one of my stories right now. he's so frustrating . . .
lol ENOUGH about disobedient characters! i'm glad to hear there's a sequel. keep up the good work!