for Crimson red7/1/2003 c1 
80Plato's Optic Runaway
i adore the first two lines! it came to you quite nicely. great job! and keep writing.
80Plato's Optic Runawayi adore the first two lines! it came to you quite nicely. great job! and keep writing.
9/6/2002 c1 114The Cheshire Kitten
This poem is very angsty, but I can't deny the truth in it. I love the first two verses: "The crimson red blood / stains the wings of the innocent". Keep it up!
114The Cheshire KittenThis poem is very angsty, but I can't deny the truth in it. I love the first two verses: "The crimson red blood / stains the wings of the innocent". Keep it up!
8/21/2002 c1 16wild star child
Wonderful rhyming and powerful, sad message. Very well done. Good job!
16wild star childWonderful rhyming and powerful, sad message. Very well done. Good job!