
1/13/2003 c2 Guest
this is great please continue soon I hhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaatttttttttte suspense
this is great please continue soon I hhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaatttttttttte suspense
10/22/2002 c3 Princess Peach2
I know I read this...and I coulda swore I reviewed it...oh well. Mmm...we need to work on this but I'm laaaaaaaaaazy!
I'm not Suck Fuck.
I know I read this...and I coulda swore I reviewed it...oh well. Mmm...we need to work on this but I'm laaaaaaaaaazy!
I'm not Suck Fuck.
10/22/2002 c3
1Wingstar23
gettin better n better with this one (well all of your stuff actually) so yes keep it up and hopefully chapter four comes soon.
~Tenshi K.~

gettin better n better with this one (well all of your stuff actually) so yes keep it up and hopefully chapter four comes soon.
~Tenshi K.~
9/29/2002 c2 Princess Peach2
Well, well, here comes the elf. I guess this means I'd better get drawing...but I don't waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanna...maybe you could persuade me with a little FY...heh heh...
YOU ARE NOT A MAN!
Uh...nevermind. That 70's show...
Well, well, here comes the elf. I guess this means I'd better get drawing...but I don't waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanna...maybe you could persuade me with a little FY...heh heh...
YOU ARE NOT A MAN!
Uh...nevermind. That 70's show...
9/29/2002 c1 wingstar23
great start! keep it up cause it has real potential.
great start! keep it up cause it has real potential.
9/4/2002 c1 Reana
Mmm...lookin' good so far. I want this to go somewhere so I can illustrate it. I'm gonna start sketching the chars soon...
Mmm...lookin' good so far. I want this to go somewhere so I can illustrate it. I'm gonna start sketching the chars soon...
8/20/2002 c1
14Juxtaposition
strange story, no da...but I'll keep reading, just to see if it gets interesting...never give up, Okami-chan!

strange story, no da...but I'll keep reading, just to see if it gets interesting...never give up, Okami-chan!