for War: The Segregation of Powers6/11/2003 c1 Frojo
Hm.
needs work, not a lot of detail. also, very short.
needs description- i have no idea of what anything looks like
the past also needs to be explained a little bit, to clarify things.
Hm.
needs work, not a lot of detail. also, very short.
needs description- i have no idea of what anything looks like
the past also needs to be explained a little bit, to clarify things.
6/11/2003 c15 
13KayjaD
AH! It's all over! :'( sad times. but on to LOVE! :) hehehe. I'm way excited! keep up the awesome work, Shallie, I love it I love it I love it!
~Lady Pompeius~
13KayjaDAH! It's all over! :'( sad times. but on to LOVE! :) hehehe. I'm way excited! keep up the awesome work, Shallie, I love it I love it I love it!
~Lady Pompeius~
6/8/2003 c14 KayjaD
AHH! Finally, Shal has returned to the writing-board! :) How wonderful. I loved it, chica. It was cute and very interesting. I can't wait for more, that's for sure! Keep it up!
Muchos amore,
Lady Pompeius
AHH! Finally, Shal has returned to the writing-board! :) How wonderful. I loved it, chica. It was cute and very interesting. I can't wait for more, that's for sure! Keep it up!
Muchos amore,
Lady Pompeius
4/18/2003 c13 KayjaD
I LOVED IT! :-D Of course. Wonderful chapter. It honestly was long enough for me, I just had to read what happened next or my head was gonna explode. :) heehee...well, I hope to read more soon, and I will make sure to work on /my/ end of the rope soon. :)
Thanks and keep it up! -
-Kayla, Lady Pompeius! :)-heehee
I LOVED IT! :-D Of course. Wonderful chapter. It honestly was long enough for me, I just had to read what happened next or my head was gonna explode. :) heehee...well, I hope to read more soon, and I will make sure to work on /my/ end of the rope soon. :)
Thanks and keep it up! -
-Kayla, Lady Pompeius! :)-heehee
3/9/2003 c11 KayjaD
OF COURSE! I LOVE IT! :-D what else am I to say to a masterpiece such as this? Great job once again, I'm so excited that you are writing this.woohoo! -Luvs! Lady Kayla Pompeius
OF COURSE! I LOVE IT! :-D what else am I to say to a masterpiece such as this? Great job once again, I'm so excited that you are writing this.woohoo! -Luvs! Lady Kayla Pompeius
1/27/2003 c10 li wei
make longer chapters! and update soon k?
make longer chapters! and update soon k?
1/26/2003 c10 KayjaD
Hey hey hey! :) I love this story, even though you told me this chapter was short, I love it! :) This is so awesome. Keep it up, gurlie! :)
-Kay aka Lady Pompeius :)
Hey hey hey! :) I love this story, even though you told me this chapter was short, I love it! :) This is so awesome. Keep it up, gurlie! :)
-Kay aka Lady Pompeius :)
12/27/2002 c9 KayjaD
NOoOo! It stops here? This is awesome! and I love my character interaction. I never play the "bad girl" hehehe...I'm soo loving this. Do write more soon!:)-K
NOoOo! It stops here? This is awesome! and I love my character interaction. I never play the "bad girl" hehehe...I'm soo loving this. Do write more soon!:)-K
12/24/2002 c8 KayjaD
AHHHHHHHHHh! Bravisimo! Wonderful as usual. I loved it, girl! Keep up your awesome work. I hope that you have a wonderful christmas and I am totally looking forward to your next chapter! ==K==
AHHHHHHHHHh! Bravisimo! Wonderful as usual. I loved it, girl! Keep up your awesome work. I hope that you have a wonderful christmas and I am totally looking forward to your next chapter! ==K==
12/11/2002 c7 13KayjaD
Oh My Gods that was amazing, girlie! You know I love this story. I totally love where this is going! Do write more, I pray your muse treats you well! :) hehehe-Kay
13KayjaDOh My Gods that was amazing, girlie! You know I love this story. I totally love where this is going! Do write more, I pray your muse treats you well! :) hehehe-Kay
12/11/2002 c7 li wei
one word... update!
one word... update!
11/27/2002 c5 KayjaD
Whoo! this is amazing, Shal. :-D I'm so glad muses are on our sides, maybe just for the holiday season, I dunno, hahaha...Keep up the awesome work, I'm totally diggin it so far. I'm currently working on my fic so I can get it up and running. I hope to talk to you soon and read more on this. mmmmm...Pompey.. lol! Jeremy Callaghan of course. hehe. :-D~~K
Whoo! this is amazing, Shal. :-D I'm so glad muses are on our sides, maybe just for the holiday season, I dunno, hahaha...Keep up the awesome work, I'm totally diggin it so far. I'm currently working on my fic so I can get it up and running. I hope to talk to you soon and read more on this. mmmmm...Pompey.. lol! Jeremy Callaghan of course. hehe. :-D~~K
8/21/2002 c1 The Red Fox Camio
The story is quite good, but at the beginning it is a bit confusing. You might want to read through it to fix the typos, nothing too big. Can't wait to find out what happened!
The story is quite good, but at the beginning it is a bit confusing. You might want to read through it to fix the typos, nothing too big. Can't wait to find out what happened!