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5/31/2005 c1 words you used to know
Your work is really wonderful. This is one of those wonderful pieces which I'm sure many people can relate to quite well. Love it!

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11/25/2002 c1 90SweetGrape
Kinda cute:)

Nice and fairly accurate decriptions- 'attract a crowd' 'but you don't listen'- convincing child perspective.

Easy to relate to, especially with 'you're just making it worse' and all the frustration and annoyance when people try to help.

Nice, warm ending.
8/25/2002 c1 13Dendera
Isn't that the truth? ;) But in the end, you're exactly right- after the nearly patronizing fussing, those unwanted attentions usually make help to make it all better. How we contradict ourselves; wanting to be so grown-up, to handle things all on our own, only to give in to those childhood remedies. Very cute poem ^_~

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