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2/3/2003 c1 Sara Minks1
my only criticism for this is that you need a little more proofreading, especially in the beginning- there's a repetition of words that kind of downplays the rest of the story, which is very well written- as well as once or twice, i think you used one word, but were looking for another- e.g. forbidding vs. foreboding in paragraph one. I like your alusions and your metaphors- a very poetic horror story! Well done.

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