6/22/2008 c1 23english summer rain
this is just beautiful. i have to say i've grown rather attached with it, i've read it so many times. i love the metaphors, especially the 'plastic palm trees' one and 'the city of angels'. i can't point out anything wrong, it's perfect! you've given me inspiration. :)
this is just beautiful. i have to say i've grown rather attached with it, i've read it so many times. i love the metaphors, especially the 'plastic palm trees' one and 'the city of angels'. i can't point out anything wrong, it's perfect! you've given me inspiration. :)
9/19/2007 c1 ree
very beautiful, eloquent, and might i say absolutely touching.
very beautiful, eloquent, and might i say absolutely touching.
4/1/2006 c1 Digital Rebel
Simple, but stylish and original. Very inspiring. Great work. =)
Simple, but stylish and original. Very inspiring. Great work. =)
4/17/2003 c1 Not 'N' Angel
it was good, my favorite letters were letters:I & V (3 & 5) but all the letters were very very good!
it was good, my favorite letters were letters:I & V (3 & 5) but all the letters were very very good!
10/27/2002 c1 Taco1
Holy guackie! This is so beautiful. And sad. I'm adding this to favorites. Its inspiring. I'll look at it whenever I need inspiration.
Holy guackie! This is so beautiful. And sad. I'm adding this to favorites. Its inspiring. I'll look at it whenever I need inspiration.
9/14/2002 c1 10White Rabbit4
Goodness. I told you before - I /love/ this poem! Much coolness and perfection. It looks even spiffier with the format like that.
Faorties list, yes indeedy.
Goodness. I told you before - I /love/ this poem! Much coolness and perfection. It looks even spiffier with the format like that.
Faorties list, yes indeedy.
8/26/2002 c1 252account inactive00000
This is pleasantly bittersweet. Love the title as well, made the poem. Ah, very nice work!
This is pleasantly bittersweet. Love the title as well, made the poem. Ah, very nice work!