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pretty good and witty favorite line so far is "ill teach you creativity" haha
though it does take place in a teenage setting that i usually hate reading but the wit and writing keep it going. pretty good.
pretty good and witty favorite line so far is "ill teach you creativity" haha
though it does take place in a teenage setting that i usually hate reading but the wit and writing keep it going. pretty good.
6/12/2012 c50 ndagutierrez
Wow. I love it! Finished in one seating! :) I love Andria and Dave! They're so cute together. Even on the first date, I already wanted them to be together. Dave's so sweeeeeet! I want a Dave of my own! Gaaaah. xD Anyways, I also like Adam. He's a very nice guy and he genuinely cares about Andria but not as much as Dave does for her. I don't know, maybe he cares for her as a best friend, I'm not really sure. But he's really a nice guy. Thank you so much for the story, it's awesome even though I have questions like how Dave feels now that he'll be going to college and leaving Andria, because I never really got to know how he felt about that and also about Brad and Julie? Okayyy, I'm done. This is just a treat to read. Thanks again. XO
Wow. I love it! Finished in one seating! :) I love Andria and Dave! They're so cute together. Even on the first date, I already wanted them to be together. Dave's so sweeeeeet! I want a Dave of my own! Gaaaah. xD Anyways, I also like Adam. He's a very nice guy and he genuinely cares about Andria but not as much as Dave does for her. I don't know, maybe he cares for her as a best friend, I'm not really sure. But he's really a nice guy. Thank you so much for the story, it's awesome even though I have questions like how Dave feels now that he'll be going to college and leaving Andria, because I never really got to know how he felt about that and also about Brad and Julie? Okayyy, I'm done. This is just a treat to read. Thanks again. XO
7/14/2011 c50 Alanisaur
I did it.! 50 chapters! But, they were very easy to read. With all the humor and drama. Dave is fucking hilarious along with Adam. ;) J is still kinda slutty and bitchy but I wish her happiness with Brad. I love her screen names. I'll admit your story didnt have the best grammar and there are some plot holes. But the story was great. :) I love how you incorporated French in hear alot. Most people write in English then inform the reader that it was supposed to be in a different language.
Favorite character? DAVE. OUR FUTURE PRESIDENT.
P.S. No sequel needed. I recomend this to be a stand-alone story.
I did it.! 50 chapters! But, they were very easy to read. With all the humor and drama. Dave is fucking hilarious along with Adam. ;) J is still kinda slutty and bitchy but I wish her happiness with Brad. I love her screen names. I'll admit your story didnt have the best grammar and there are some plot holes. But the story was great. :) I love how you incorporated French in hear alot. Most people write in English then inform the reader that it was supposed to be in a different language.
Favorite character? DAVE. OUR FUTURE PRESIDENT.
P.S. No sequel needed. I recomend this to be a stand-alone story.
2/18/2010 c12 kin
dave doesn't seem the type to write in a journal
dave doesn't seem the type to write in a journal
11/26/2009 c50 
7Your Execution
Aww my god i love these lines haha. especially "First, I’ll teach her French. When that’s done, I’ll teach her creativity." haha. I love it. This story was absolutly freakin AMAZING. Seriously, it's awesome. I love it :D Good job, I'm going to go read your other story now :D
7Your ExecutionAww my god i love these lines haha. especially "First, I’ll teach her French. When that’s done, I’ll teach her creativity." haha. I love it. This story was absolutly freakin AMAZING. Seriously, it's awesome. I love it :D Good job, I'm going to go read your other story now :D
9/26/2009 c29 Shadow
You have an error in this chapter, which for some reason really amused me.
3rd line from the bottom.
"He’s my cousin’s girlfriend."
You have an error in this chapter, which for some reason really amused me.
3rd line from the bottom.
"He’s my cousin’s girlfriend."
2/28/2009 c50 58MetroxStation
I loved this story! its awesome! i tried to review it like a week ago... but fictionpress was being stupid... anywayz i loved this story!
58MetroxStationI loved this story! its awesome! i tried to review it like a week ago... but fictionpress was being stupid... anywayz i loved this story!
1/3/2009 c50 sunflower.kiss
That was adorable! And I really think Adam was my favorite character out of everyone. Just the way how no one expected Andria and him to get together made him so much more wanted. And the stubble part - oh jeez. Dave is cute, but he's too perfect for my taste. Anyway, off to read the It wasn't a Rumor!
That was adorable! And I really think Adam was my favorite character out of everyone. Just the way how no one expected Andria and him to get together made him so much more wanted. And the stubble part - oh jeez. Dave is cute, but he's too perfect for my taste. Anyway, off to read the It wasn't a Rumor!