for The Love Of A Slave3/14/2011 c4 
4DawnsFire
I love the story. And I'd love to see it continued - though it's been like 10 years, so I doubt that's a possibility. Anyway, the interactions between the two are adorable.
4DawnsFireI love the story. And I'd love to see it continued - though it's been like 10 years, so I doubt that's a possibility. Anyway, the interactions between the two are adorable.
7/9/2007 c7 teardropsONroses
i'm sitting here trying to think of what to write to tell you. All i get is this weird fishy noise i get when i don't know what to say. you should definately right more. i love love love love this story and i can't believe you left everyone hanging like this. so write more! please.
i'm sitting here trying to think of what to write to tell you. All i get is this weird fishy noise i get when i don't know what to say. you should definately right more. i love love love love this story and i can't believe you left everyone hanging like this. so write more! please.
7/9/2007 c4 teardropsONroses
i was going to try to read the whole way through without reviewing, and review at the end, but i can't. of course it's not terrible! it's beautiful, and you did a very good job. i love it!
i was going to try to read the whole way through without reviewing, and review at the end, but i can't. of course it's not terrible! it's beautiful, and you did a very good job. i love it!
5/19/2005 c7 DawnsFire
Awsome, nice love story. You're a good writer, and this was a good story for you. You do wonderfully with dialouge. If you wanted some constructive critisism, you could add some more details, but the story is fine without them. All in All it was a great story. Hope you finish it.
Awsome, nice love story. You're a good writer, and this was a good story for you. You do wonderfully with dialouge. If you wanted some constructive critisism, you could add some more details, but the story is fine without them. All in All it was a great story. Hope you finish it.
4/15/2005 c7 Desirta
It's so good!I read through it in one sitting, I can't wait until the next chappie comes out!
It's so good!I read through it in one sitting, I can't wait until the next chappie comes out!
4/20/2004 c7 000000000000000000000
This is a nice, sweet romance you've got going here. I'm enjoying it.
The writing, however, feels very rushed. Rushed as in you typed it very fast and slapped it up on ff.net as soon as you were done. There are just a lot of little mistakes and run-on sentences. Not big deals, just typo-like things.
Your style is fine, very clear. Just give everything a good, thorough once over. :) I'm not trying to be picky-but it can get distracting.
I'm curious what Cordius had to say before Antonia kicked him out. He didn't seem his usual self. What happened? [dun dun DUN!}
This is a nice, sweet romance you've got going here. I'm enjoying it.
The writing, however, feels very rushed. Rushed as in you typed it very fast and slapped it up on ff.net as soon as you were done. There are just a lot of little mistakes and run-on sentences. Not big deals, just typo-like things.
Your style is fine, very clear. Just give everything a good, thorough once over. :) I'm not trying to be picky-but it can get distracting.
I'm curious what Cordius had to say before Antonia kicked him out. He didn't seem his usual self. What happened? [dun dun DUN!}
4/19/2004 c1 1Sweetvenom1
This story is absolutely the best, I mean that. I love your scenario and characters. I am a bit pressed for time just now, I will leave longer, better reviews for the other chapters later!
1Sweetvenom1This story is absolutely the best, I mean that. I love your scenario and characters. I am a bit pressed for time just now, I will leave longer, better reviews for the other chapters later!
4/18/2004 c7 MJNobody
ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh
This is such a great story!
I love the way you switch perspectives every chapter, it really allows the reader to get to know your characters. Oh this is such a good story! Why havn't you updated?
I think you should update.
love,
~Rajani~
ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh
This is such a great story!
I love the way you switch perspectives every chapter, it really allows the reader to get to know your characters. Oh this is such a good story! Why havn't you updated?
I think you should update.
love,
~Rajani~
10/30/2003 c7 focusly
wow I loved this! Theo is so cute! Please tell me you'll continue this? **puppy dog eyes**
wow I loved this! Theo is so cute! Please tell me you'll continue this? **puppy dog eyes**
9/26/2003 c7 18Kathryn Merlin
i read all of the chapters just now. they are amzaing! i cant wait to read more! after performing julius caesar in the summer, i have been obsessed with ancient rome, so i was looking for something with rome in it so this is perfect. what i would do, though, is put more talking between theo and antonia instead of just kissing and the such. keep up the good work!
18Kathryn Merlini read all of the chapters just now. they are amzaing! i cant wait to read more! after performing julius caesar in the summer, i have been obsessed with ancient rome, so i was looking for something with rome in it so this is perfect. what i would do, though, is put more talking between theo and antonia instead of just kissing and the such. keep up the good work!
3/23/2003 c7 13Anna Bolina
I don't usually like love stories, but I like this! I don't usually find myself to be a fan of long stories, but this was just...superb. You avoided most cliches! Please write more! (Now for the self-advertising part: Please R+R something of mine as I did yours! I suggest The Roads in Rome, another story about a girl in Ancient Rome who is forced to marry against her will)
13Anna BolinaI don't usually like love stories, but I like this! I don't usually find myself to be a fan of long stories, but this was just...superb. You avoided most cliches! Please write more! (Now for the self-advertising part: Please R+R something of mine as I did yours! I suggest The Roads in Rome, another story about a girl in Ancient Rome who is forced to marry against her will)
2/7/2003 c7 saiyan-girl-cheetah
Oh dude! you must continue this story! I love this one! That dang perv Cordius...I just loath the guy! Which means you're doing a good job! and I just love Theo and Antonia being together...it's so sweet! Please don't let this end like Romeo and Juliet! I'll cry so much i'll die from a broken heart like an elf! Okay maybe I won't die but i'll feel bad! Please let them have a happy ending! And most of all please continue with this story!
Oh dude! you must continue this story! I love this one! That dang perv Cordius...I just loath the guy! Which means you're doing a good job! and I just love Theo and Antonia being together...it's so sweet! Please don't let this end like Romeo and Juliet! I'll cry so much i'll die from a broken heart like an elf! Okay maybe I won't die but i'll feel bad! Please let them have a happy ending! And most of all please continue with this story!
12/22/2002 c7 trixiedust
Wow! Keep it up!
I first read a Legolas story today, and decided to read more of your work! I am not disappointed!
Please post more of this story!
And of course, of the Legs story too!
Happy Christmas!
Wow! Keep it up!
I first read a Legolas story today, and decided to read more of your work! I am not disappointed!
Please post more of this story!
And of course, of the Legs story too!
Happy Christmas!