8/30/2002 c1 60nuclear red
This poem is very powerful and expressive. Good imagery. I can honestly say that I know it feels to just want the pain of depression to go away. Never give up, and keep up the good work! Excellent poem!

Always be yourself :)

-Nuclear Red

8/30/2002 c2 55Fire of the Vampire
The first one was better than the second, but I like the way you turned the little worm poem thing into a very dark and depressing poem. Good job on these!

God Bless

Much Love

Later Daze

- Kacie