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11/13/2002 c1 AndrewB
Some little problems: you don't need to capitalise when continuing a sentence after closing quotes, and there are rather too many typos - spellcheck it! Also, it seems a little unlikely that someone would be called "Anthony Tony".

On the plus side, you've set out the paragraphs properly, and there's a nice sense of the victim's mindset as she approaches death.
9/6/2002 c1 2Violyn
so good...
9/1/2002 c1 Stick too lazy 2 log in
That was cute! I loved the way you went through her thoughts and emotions and she was bing led to the guillotine, it was very good!

loadsa smiles

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