for The Chip12/30/2011 c20 
10The-One-Who-Needs-A-Life
THIS STORY IS AMAZING! :D:D:DD I wish you had done just one more chapter, perhaps when She was all grown up, and have her meeting Mike one more time. That would really be the icing on the cake, But it was still amazingly good! :D
Just a few things... In chapter 19, it would've been an absolutely fantastic cliff hanger if the chapter ended with 'BANG' and then it cut off. Even if it was a short chapter, it would've made you're readers just scream, and want you to update immediately, leaving you with a promising to return audience.
And apart from a few other things, places where you coulda used more detail, this story was extremely good! There goes a favourite for you, and well done!
Bring me a life
~The one who needs a life.
10The-One-Who-Needs-A-LifeTHIS STORY IS AMAZING! :D:D:DD I wish you had done just one more chapter, perhaps when She was all grown up, and have her meeting Mike one more time. That would really be the icing on the cake, But it was still amazingly good! :D
Just a few things... In chapter 19, it would've been an absolutely fantastic cliff hanger if the chapter ended with 'BANG' and then it cut off. Even if it was a short chapter, it would've made you're readers just scream, and want you to update immediately, leaving you with a promising to return audience.
And apart from a few other things, places where you coulda used more detail, this story was extremely good! There goes a favourite for you, and well done!
Bring me a life
~The one who needs a life.
7/1/2005 c20 6Silver-Dragon5
So thats the end! What an excellent adventure. I really did like that ending. It was sad but hopeful. Cogratulations!
~Silver
6Silver-Dragon5So thats the end! What an excellent adventure. I really did like that ending. It was sad but hopeful. Cogratulations!
~Silver
5/24/2005 c14 4Phantom of Shadows
Oh! I do hope you'll be updating this story soon! It's very good! Great suspense, and great cliffhangers. Wouldn't mind seeing some longer chapters, as it would help pick up the pace a bit more. But, other than that, great! Keep up the good work!
4Phantom of ShadowsOh! I do hope you'll be updating this story soon! It's very good! Great suspense, and great cliffhangers. Wouldn't mind seeing some longer chapters, as it would help pick up the pace a bit more. But, other than that, great! Keep up the good work!
5/14/2005 c19 6Silver-Dragon5
I think it was another awesome chapter. I'm happy to see that Mike has come around and is going to help Robin. I still wanna see a relationship- though that is impossible because he's too old for her. lol. Its a good climax but what are they going to do now? Is there much more to come? Can't wait.
~Silver
6Silver-Dragon5I think it was another awesome chapter. I'm happy to see that Mike has come around and is going to help Robin. I still wanna see a relationship- though that is impossible because he's too old for her. lol. Its a good climax but what are they going to do now? Is there much more to come? Can't wait.
~Silver
5/3/2005 c1 83Adonia Chesser
Wow, this is a great start, I can't wait to read the rest. It was really good.
Thanks for the review, I didn't know what people would think of it, so thanks again.
83Adonia ChesserWow, this is a great start, I can't wait to read the rest. It was really good.
Thanks for the review, I didn't know what people would think of it, so thanks again.
4/27/2005 c18 6Silver-Dragon5
Wow! What a twist! If my memory serves me correct she hasn't done anything with the chip so I wonder what's happened.
I'm glad to see that you updated. I've been waiting for someone to update and that someone has been now filled by you. Thankyou! lol.
Keep writing.
~Silver
6Silver-Dragon5Wow! What a twist! If my memory serves me correct she hasn't done anything with the chip so I wonder what's happened.
I'm glad to see that you updated. I've been waiting for someone to update and that someone has been now filled by you. Thankyou! lol.
Keep writing.
~Silver
4/16/2005 c17 Silver-Dragon5
Well I'm still enjoying your story Bish, even if you feel like you're growing out of it. You are a very good writer who leaves you with a cliffhanger at every ending. I would like to see longer chapters but then it doesn't really matter- so long as the quality of the chapter is good, and yours always is.
I can't wait to read more. I can't even guess what might come next in this fast-paced, action-packed mystery. Keep writing.
~Silver
Well I'm still enjoying your story Bish, even if you feel like you're growing out of it. You are a very good writer who leaves you with a cliffhanger at every ending. I would like to see longer chapters but then it doesn't really matter- so long as the quality of the chapter is good, and yours always is.
I can't wait to read more. I can't even guess what might come next in this fast-paced, action-packed mystery. Keep writing.
~Silver
4/16/2005 c12 Silver-Dragon5
Good so far, though it seems like the first man from the plane lost his accent near the end.
Good work.
~Silver
Good so far, though it seems like the first man from the plane lost his accent near the end.
Good work.
~Silver
4/16/2005 c11 Silver-Dragon5
I'm still reading. Up to this chapter. Its so good. I'm waiting to hit a chapter that I can't at all remember.
Just a quick question: is Robin still handcuffed? I just don't remember Mike taking them off and she has a shower and escapes? She could do it with handcuffs on.
Another good chapter.~Silver
I'm still reading. Up to this chapter. Its so good. I'm waiting to hit a chapter that I can't at all remember.
Just a quick question: is Robin still handcuffed? I just don't remember Mike taking them off and she has a shower and escapes? She could do it with handcuffs on.
Another good chapter.~Silver
4/16/2005 c8 Silver-Dragon5
Ok, I couldn't review any of the other chapters because I reviewed them ages ago. I still love your story and I am beginning to remember things that I'd previously forgotten.
I would love to see a romance evolve from Mike and Robin but Mike must be so much older than her- plus, if my additions correct, she's only 14! Oh well, maybe he can become like a big brother kind of thing.
~Silver
Ok, I couldn't review any of the other chapters because I reviewed them ages ago. I still love your story and I am beginning to remember things that I'd previously forgotten.
I would love to see a romance evolve from Mike and Robin but Mike must be so much older than her- plus, if my additions correct, she's only 14! Oh well, maybe he can become like a big brother kind of thing.
~Silver
4/16/2005 c4 Silver-Dragon5
Another good chapter. Some spelling mistakes there but no major ones.
The plane seems really big. They travel done so many hallways- the plan must be a maze of some sort.
Love it- gotta keep reading.
~Silver
Another good chapter. Some spelling mistakes there but no major ones.
The plane seems really big. They travel done so many hallways- the plan must be a maze of some sort.
Love it- gotta keep reading.
~Silver
4/16/2005 c3 Silver-Dragon5
I love your character's obscure thoughts throughout the whole process- like the sock thing and the mention of Air Force One and the like. It really adds personality and reveals how she handles pressure.
We find her name out soon, don't we? I can't remember.
Anyway, I've gotta keep reading- 14 more chapters to go.
~Silver
I love your character's obscure thoughts throughout the whole process- like the sock thing and the mention of Air Force One and the like. It really adds personality and reveals how she handles pressure.
We find her name out soon, don't we? I can't remember.
Anyway, I've gotta keep reading- 14 more chapters to go.
~Silver
4/16/2005 c2 Silver-Dragon5
Hey Bish. Its been a while since I've read your story and since you've written more- and I don't want to miss anything important- I've started reading it from the beginning again. (I wonder if you remember me- or maybe my story "In The Tiger's Mouth"). I've placed a new story on the net and I thought I'd look up the stories I was reading. Can't wait to read the rest. I'm remembering how good your story is. lol.
~Silver
Hey Bish. Its been a while since I've read your story and since you've written more- and I don't want to miss anything important- I've started reading it from the beginning again. (I wonder if you remember me- or maybe my story "In The Tiger's Mouth"). I've placed a new story on the net and I thought I'd look up the stories I was reading. Can't wait to read the rest. I'm remembering how good your story is. lol.
~Silver