for Somewhere In Middle America1/22/2006 c30 Alenor
aw that was a great story. i like it heaps. i'm glad that mally and jersey got together, and i'm glad that darrel and alexis got together and that they all got rid of zannah. my god she was a bitch and a half! soz but yeah. anyway, great story, cya later.
aw that was a great story. i like it heaps. i'm glad that mally and jersey got together, and i'm glad that darrel and alexis got together and that they all got rid of zannah. my god she was a bitch and a half! soz but yeah. anyway, great story, cya later.
5/20/2005 c30 becxfok01
Oh wow, I read it all at once because i loved it so much. The story plot itself isn't the most complicated thing, but you wrote it so well. There weren't any of the best friend end up being lovers cliche, which I applaud to you. Jaz's feelings and character is fantastic. I feel so completely moved after reading your story. I'm at the end of my Freshman year in university now, and my gosh, I totally got all those feelings. They described it perfectly. Well, I didn't have boyfriend problems or such, but the whole new environment, new people, old people drifting apart, work etc. Seriously, you are a skilled writer. And I'm glad this is one of your finished stories. Thank you so much for writing it.
Oh wow, I read it all at once because i loved it so much. The story plot itself isn't the most complicated thing, but you wrote it so well. There weren't any of the best friend end up being lovers cliche, which I applaud to you. Jaz's feelings and character is fantastic. I feel so completely moved after reading your story. I'm at the end of my Freshman year in university now, and my gosh, I totally got all those feelings. They described it perfectly. Well, I didn't have boyfriend problems or such, but the whole new environment, new people, old people drifting apart, work etc. Seriously, you are a skilled writer. And I'm glad this is one of your finished stories. Thank you so much for writing it.
12/21/2004 c30 lilleo
okay, do you ever get the feelign that people dont review a story because it is finished, and was so a while ago? this seems like the case here, anyhoo i really enjoyed this story, even if i did get slightly confused at times, although im sure thats because i had about 3 people trying to talk to me online, and 3 in rl at the same time. uh yeah ill stop rambling now. i should have just made this simple - ill start overI like this story.that wasnt so hard now was it ;)
okay, do you ever get the feelign that people dont review a story because it is finished, and was so a while ago? this seems like the case here, anyhoo i really enjoyed this story, even if i did get slightly confused at times, although im sure thats because i had about 3 people trying to talk to me online, and 3 in rl at the same time. uh yeah ill stop rambling now. i should have just made this simple - ill start overI like this story.that wasnt so hard now was it ;)
11/30/2003 c24 
4Village
Great story and writing. The characterization is quite well done and you have the feelings down. I wish your story had the quantity of reviews that so many of the horribly written ones do because you actually deserve them.
I'm not done and I'm not sure if I'm interested in finishing at this point. But I had to let you know that you had me sitting here for most of the evening reading this thing. Keep doing what you're doing. You're doing a good job of it. =)
4VillageGreat story and writing. The characterization is quite well done and you have the feelings down. I wish your story had the quantity of reviews that so many of the horribly written ones do because you actually deserve them.
I'm not done and I'm not sure if I'm interested in finishing at this point. But I had to let you know that you had me sitting here for most of the evening reading this thing. Keep doing what you're doing. You're doing a good job of it. =)
5/12/2003 c30 Michelle
i like that ending, not cliché happy forever n ever stuff and you put that cute moral-esque thought at the end
now write more "color me in"!
i like that ending, not cliché happy forever n ever stuff and you put that cute moral-esque thought at the end
now write more "color me in"!
5/12/2003 c30 Ren
Yay! happy ending! I'm sad it's all over though :( are you gonna write a new story? can't wait!
Yay! happy ending! I'm sad it's all over though :( are you gonna write a new story? can't wait!
5/11/2003 c30 13Faded Soulfire
Congrats on finishing your first story. I bet it feels good. I can't wait to finish a story and then the burden of updating and everything is a little off your shoulders...I really enjoyed this story and I'm sad its coming to an end but it had to end sometime...and I was wondering if u were going to finish chesapeake bay? i was just overlooking it and i've seen that it hasn't been updated since last year. hey, i like it...if that counts for anything at all. i've only read a bit of it but plz finish it...pretty please?
Much Love, faded soulfire
13Faded SoulfireCongrats on finishing your first story. I bet it feels good. I can't wait to finish a story and then the burden of updating and everything is a little off your shoulders...I really enjoyed this story and I'm sad its coming to an end but it had to end sometime...and I was wondering if u were going to finish chesapeake bay? i was just overlooking it and i've seen that it hasn't been updated since last year. hey, i like it...if that counts for anything at all. i've only read a bit of it but plz finish it...pretty please?
Much Love, faded soulfire
5/11/2003 c30 jarvie
Wow, I love this story. Seriously. I'm sorry I couldn't get off my butt and review this until you ended it, it was a wonderful story. I love Mally. hehehe. I like all your other stories too, so update them all. Please. Keep up the great work!
Wow, I love this story. Seriously. I'm sorry I couldn't get off my butt and review this until you ended it, it was a wonderful story. I love Mally. hehehe. I like all your other stories too, so update them all. Please. Keep up the great work!
5/10/2003 c30 Yodes
Aww, see! You CAN pull off the smoochies! :) Lol, it was just as good as the other chapters dude. I like how you finished it off, I like the sarcasm, and I like the humor. I can't wait for you to finish your other fics.
Great story dude:P
Yodes
Aww, see! You CAN pull off the smoochies! :) Lol, it was just as good as the other chapters dude. I like how you finished it off, I like the sarcasm, and I like the humor. I can't wait for you to finish your other fics.
Great story dude:P
Yodes
5/7/2003 c29 48Someone Out There Cares
lol. iliked this chapter. itz just ur author's not the made me laugh because theres this 12th grader who looks like shaggy except for the hair. and whenever i walk past him, i always tell my friends "there goes shaggy". but now ilike him, but letz not go into that. sorry for all that excess info. great chapter, write more!
48Someone Out There Careslol. iliked this chapter. itz just ur author's not the made me laugh because theres this 12th grader who looks like shaggy except for the hair. and whenever i walk past him, i always tell my friends "there goes shaggy". but now ilike him, but letz not go into that. sorry for all that excess info. great chapter, write more!
4/27/2003 c29 11Jacaranda
They put a 1 on my name. How strange. Anyway, I love your couply stuff, even if you don't want to write it, and Jez and Mal have a wonderful naturalness about them. Zannah got smacked .. did you do that just to gratify your readers?
11JacarandaThey put a 1 on my name. How strange. Anyway, I love your couply stuff, even if you don't want to write it, and Jez and Mal have a wonderful naturalness about them. Zannah got smacked .. did you do that just to gratify your readers?
4/21/2003 c29 13Faded Soulfire
dude, u must seriously continue! this story is great & i'd write a more helpful review for u but time is short and maybe i will next time. i'll pray for some stupid time...yep, this week in school might be pretty hectic for me so i'm not sure if chapter 2 to "untitled" will be up but it possibly could...and thanx for reviewing. it is so nice to hear what ppl think, especially with good things!
13Faded Soulfiredude, u must seriously continue! this story is great & i'd write a more helpful review for u but time is short and maybe i will next time. i'll pray for some stupid time...yep, this week in school might be pretty hectic for me so i'm not sure if chapter 2 to "untitled" will be up but it possibly could...and thanx for reviewing. it is so nice to hear what ppl think, especially with good things!
4/21/2003 c28 Faded Soulfire
sorry i didn't review this when u posted. i've been so busy when i was preparing for easter and i had so much crap to do & make. its not fun having to help prepare food for lot's of ppl. anyway, i just wanted to say that i am thorougly enjoying this.
off to next chapter now.
sorry i didn't review this when u posted. i've been so busy when i was preparing for easter and i had so much crap to do & make. its not fun having to help prepare food for lot's of ppl. anyway, i just wanted to say that i am thorougly enjoying this.
off to next chapter now.