for Foolish Games1/27/2012 c1 MX
Hmm...
Definitely dark. Not my thing, but you know. I really love the slightly distorted capitalization- it captures the uncut edges of the emotion you were writing. One of my best friends is a cutter. I don't want to rant or make this seem dramatic or anything, but she does it just because she fucked up her own life. She puts on pretenses and acts like she has it all and has nothing at the same time. It bugs the hell out of me. So just saying that this seems not exactly realistic, though I mean no harm to your writing. It's just so...stereotypical darkness.
Hmm...
Definitely dark. Not my thing, but you know. I really love the slightly distorted capitalization- it captures the uncut edges of the emotion you were writing. One of my best friends is a cutter. I don't want to rant or make this seem dramatic or anything, but she does it just because she fucked up her own life. She puts on pretenses and acts like she has it all and has nothing at the same time. It bugs the hell out of me. So just saying that this seems not exactly realistic, though I mean no harm to your writing. It's just so...stereotypical darkness.
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