for Darkness12/24/2007 c6 
68circus12head8
What an interesting story. This totally takes a different approach to the whole vampire and werewolves genre. I like how you integrate mystery-story elements into it, playing the supernatural parts only when you need to. It's not action packed, but it's interesting nonetheless. Things are just getting good too now, I can't wait to find out how Elwyn and Jenny get out of this situation. Keep it up!
68circus12head8What an interesting story. This totally takes a different approach to the whole vampire and werewolves genre. I like how you integrate mystery-story elements into it, playing the supernatural parts only when you need to. It's not action packed, but it's interesting nonetheless. Things are just getting good too now, I can't wait to find out how Elwyn and Jenny get out of this situation. Keep it up!
2/9/2006 c11 2Jenniexb
Well I don't know what the a**holes opinion of the story was, but I think it is great! Loving every second of it... now back to reading.
2JenniexbWell I don't know what the a**holes opinion of the story was, but I think it is great! Loving every second of it... now back to reading.
11/14/2004 c1 John
This is off to a really good start.
This is off to a really good start.
4/2/2004 c1 Funsmoke
Despite his apparent lack of emotion and arrogance, I find myself liking Elwyn as a character, though I doubt anyone would get along with him were he real. But isn't -wyn (at least in Wales) an indicator of a female name? It suits him, I suppose.
Despite his apparent lack of emotion and arrogance, I find myself liking Elwyn as a character, though I doubt anyone would get along with him were he real. But isn't -wyn (at least in Wales) an indicator of a female name? It suits him, I suppose.
8/17/2003 c27 Storyshadow
WOW, nice, I liked, it was good..^^ just two suggestions, I think you should mention somewhere why Elwyn was in the area in the first place, and you should add something about what happens when he gets home/what the others do. ya know, an epalog or whatever it's called...
WOW, nice, I liked, it was good..^^ just two suggestions, I think you should mention somewhere why Elwyn was in the area in the first place, and you should add something about what happens when he gets home/what the others do. ya know, an epalog or whatever it's called...
5/11/2003 c16 38Lucy Hawthorne
ooh, very spiffy. You did explain it well indeed, and now I know. hahaha, I'm knowledgeable! woohoo! cool. heehee
38Lucy Hawthorneooh, very spiffy. You did explain it well indeed, and now I know. hahaha, I'm knowledgeable! woohoo! cool. heehee
5/11/2003 c27 Blindy
Nice story. Still a couple of grammar mistakes and some other errors, but not bad. One thing I caught was the fact that you said Jenny wasn't a virgin a little way into the story and then you came back again a few chapters ago saying that she was. Or maybe I was confused. Anyway, good job, I enjoy reading about these particular characters...brilliant.
Nice story. Still a couple of grammar mistakes and some other errors, but not bad. One thing I caught was the fact that you said Jenny wasn't a virgin a little way into the story and then you came back again a few chapters ago saying that she was. Or maybe I was confused. Anyway, good job, I enjoy reading about these particular characters...brilliant.
5/10/2003 c26 Lucy Hawthorne
well, I'm done. And I'm very glad I read this. I do have some suggestions too.
for one I think you should explain the skull thing so that we know why it binds the two groups together. It implied that it was a magical bond but you never actually said anything. It'd be very interesting to me if not to anyone else to know what went into getting the bond in the first place.
And the second, don't ever lighten up on the gore. Nothing is too gory. lol.
I really like this and I'll be one to say that I'm definately getting this when you get it published!
well, I'm done. And I'm very glad I read this. I do have some suggestions too.
for one I think you should explain the skull thing so that we know why it binds the two groups together. It implied that it was a magical bond but you never actually said anything. It'd be very interesting to me if not to anyone else to know what went into getting the bond in the first place.
And the second, don't ever lighten up on the gore. Nothing is too gory. lol.
I really like this and I'll be one to say that I'm definately getting this when you get it published!
5/9/2003 c13 Lucy Hawthorne
He's so sick and twisted. it's just wrong. oh and Dagan's my new favorite character heeheehee
He's so sick and twisted. it's just wrong. oh and Dagan's my new favorite character heeheehee
5/8/2003 c6 Lucy Hawthorne
oh this sucks. lol...you did the strait/straight thing again. I dont' know why that bugs me so much.
oh this sucks. lol...you did the strait/straight thing again. I dont' know why that bugs me so much.
5/6/2003 c25 3Josee Poesee
lol looks like someone signed Sean up for insta-daddy. O that sounded sick lol. Great chapter as usual and update again soon! =O)
*~* Dy *~*
3Josee Poeseelol looks like someone signed Sean up for insta-daddy. O that sounded sick lol. Great chapter as usual and update again soon! =O)
*~* Dy *~*