for Specter12/5/2004 c1 Sine
I loved it. Mushiness notwithstanding. The twist was priceless.
I loved it. Mushiness notwithstanding. The twist was priceless.
212/10/2002 c1 Nick yunker
Great stary Angela! Well put together, vivid descriptions, and a well thought out storyline. 1 typo 9 paragraphs from the bottom-She wanted him to embrace her, and kiss her hair, and assure her that everything was going to be alright! Two girls? Wow thats a really deep story, u have a promising outlook as a future writer. =)
Great stary Angela! Well put together, vivid descriptions, and a well thought out storyline. 1 typo 9 paragraphs from the bottom-She wanted him to embrace her, and kiss her hair, and assure her that everything was going to be alright! Two girls? Wow thats a really deep story, u have a promising outlook as a future writer. =)
10/8/2002 c1 Frances
WOW! I almost cried... you know me, I don't cry... A GOOD STORY!
WOW! I almost cried... you know me, I don't cry... A GOOD STORY!
9/5/2002 c1 rika
nice...please write more stuff!
nice...please write more stuff!