for Seconds1/2/2005 c1 
116loversdream17
i like this one i know the feeling i have been through it to twice for the matter
116loversdream17i like this one i know the feeling i have been through it to twice for the matter
1/17/2004 c1 1whitesmoke
interesting piece of work... tragic but beautiful. You have a neat way of describing things, I hope this wasnt a personal experience, anyway, keep writing! bye!
1whitesmokeinteresting piece of work... tragic but beautiful. You have a neat way of describing things, I hope this wasnt a personal experience, anyway, keep writing! bye!
11/28/2003 c1 Evangeline
Jesus. Very intense to read; exhausting emotionally. If this isn't autobiographical, you have extraordinary insight into this horrible experience. The counting seconds keeps a rhythm and sense of terror with the reader, also making giving us a sickening look into real time. Very well written, very painful.
Jesus. Very intense to read; exhausting emotionally. If this isn't autobiographical, you have extraordinary insight into this horrible experience. The counting seconds keeps a rhythm and sense of terror with the reader, also making giving us a sickening look into real time. Very well written, very painful.
11/8/2003 c1 11DreamNightmare
wow...yea this 1 caught my eye n *speechless*...very good
DreamNightmare
11DreamNightmarewow...yea this 1 caught my eye n *speechless*...very good
DreamNightmare
10/11/2003 c1 1Heartbroken Fool
OMG! i really hope this didn't happen to you! very strong emotion in it, though
1Heartbroken FoolOMG! i really hope this didn't happen to you! very strong emotion in it, though
9/21/2003 c1 Strayct
I really hope this didnt (doenst) happen to you, cause I know how awful this can be... powerful piece, a bit creepy but in a good way,
I really hope this didnt (doenst) happen to you, cause I know how awful this can be... powerful piece, a bit creepy but in a good way,
8/13/2003 c1 NotExactlyJuliet
You did a very good job with a very sensitive and terrifying subject. I know I speak for myself and others when I say that it's horrible that anyone has ever had to go through this before.
You did a very good job with a very sensitive and terrifying subject. I know I speak for myself and others when I say that it's horrible that anyone has ever had to go through this before.
8/5/2003 c1 AVIGON
The counting of the seconds made the feeling of dread this poem emitted even more obvious. The rhythm and the structure are both excellent, but some of the wording... I don't know... it seemed a bit "flat" at times.
The counting of the seconds made the feeling of dread this poem emitted even more obvious. The rhythm and the structure are both excellent, but some of the wording... I don't know... it seemed a bit "flat" at times.
3/1/2003 c1 10Cracked up cat
Wow, sounds scary! this doesn't happen does it? well i hope not, but it is very well done and the numbers work great.
laura (kitten poo)
btw- thanks 4 the review! :-)
10Cracked up catWow, sounds scary! this doesn't happen does it? well i hope not, but it is very well done and the numbers work great.
laura (kitten poo)
btw- thanks 4 the review! :-)
12/7/2002 c1 Agathy
OMG...did this really happen? This is really touching and depressing. Keep writing poetry because you're a lot better than I am =)
OMG...did this really happen? This is really touching and depressing. Keep writing poetry because you're a lot better than I am =)