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12/14/2002 c1 90SweetGrape
Ha! Very cute and honest- easy to relate to.

Warm, familiar, comforting atmosphere in the first stanza.

'My world crashes down', 'My boyfriend says we're through' etc and then comes back to the soothing coffee, which reminds you of the first stanza feeling.

Second last stanza is strong and honest and funny:)

Very cute!
9/10/2002 c1 idontwriteherenomore
Hahah babe, bout coffe? hehe it was very well written and even tho it can seam a bit depressing it was very funny! well done

Love Eli
9/8/2002 c1 Chloe20
Katie! (shall call you by proper name for change, now you are a coolies poet!)

WOW! That was amazing, I loved it! Was all deep and made me think...on the surface it seems to simple, yet at same time is so clever!

You never cease to amaze me, you are just sooooo talented, and sometimes I dont think you realise it...this is just amazing!

Wow! *takes deep breath to recover*

WELL DONE!

Love Chlo xx
9/8/2002 c1 Pauls-Sex-Slave
yay coffee! i can understand that! i always wake up all bad tempered and tired or having a bad day and coffee always makes me feel better!

"I just say fuck to the world" liked that bit! hehe reeeallly good poem

lotsa love

kayleigh

xxxxx
9/8/2002 c1 7mango surprise
ARRAGGGHHHHHHHHHHH! my awe inspired babe helllooooooooooo!

Am so glad u put this one up! i cannot BEEEELIIIEVVEE u! i jus ask a simple what r u doing q, n u turn out to b writing something completely astounding. n then u say its NORMAL? hahhahahahhahaha!

yup, u really do amaze me. am neva gonna stop saying that. ur in this new aura to me now, haha, n look up to u so much.

neways, the thing i love about this poem is just that so many ppl can relate to it on so many levels! every1 needs a little comfort wen they're down n havin problems, and u turn to coffee! hehe, needless to say i'd turn to something like revels or milkshakes hahhahaahhaa, but each to their own! n just love how simple n effective it is. ahhhh i love! i know deep down u love, too.

neways, am off to read ur others now babe!

take care and don't stop being urself.

all my love, xxxx
9/8/2002 c1 Twoooooody
aww! Katieeeeeee!

its soooo collies!

haha, laughed for ages!

OLuv Trudy xxx

ps, an update will be around today, so watch out!
9/8/2002 c1 BB9
hehe that was gd!

uvgone all deep on us... like chris! lol! nah but ur v.gd at poetry! well done

luv hay and lou xxx

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