for The Voyage of the Exile10/22/2002 c2 Toona Phish
I think that your story is really interesting so far. It's kinda confusing though. More action wouldn't hurt either. Keep it up. ^_^
I think that your story is really interesting so far. It's kinda confusing though. More action wouldn't hurt either. Keep it up. ^_^
9/8/2002 c1 
1The Grim Amentia
^.^ Melikes.
I've read both of the earlier versions before, but seeing how greatly your writing skill has improved, I think that I'll enjoy this one the most. Kudos!
1The Grim Amentia^.^ Melikes.
I've read both of the earlier versions before, but seeing how greatly your writing skill has improved, I think that I'll enjoy this one the most. Kudos!