for Scratching at Rusty Surfaces9/20/2002 c1 Liller
hmmm. i think i like it but i'm not sure since i don't know what you're talking about... any hints?
hmmm. i think i like it but i'm not sure since i don't know what you're talking about... any hints?
969/10/2002 c1 Topher
Random! But I have to say, it's a little too random. You lost me at some points, they weren't really connected. Or was that the point? Either way, maybe you should try to connect at least some of the thoughts in your poem. I think it would appeal more to the reader.
Random! But I have to say, it's a little too random. You lost me at some points, they weren't really connected. Or was that the point? Either way, maybe you should try to connect at least some of the thoughts in your poem. I think it would appeal more to the reader.