for Mute Button7/28/2003 c1 
3Subliminal Ambulence
This is sad...I wish you'd fill it in a bit more, though. that'd make it more interesting. (not that it isn't)
3Subliminal AmbulenceThis is sad...I wish you'd fill it in a bit more, though. that'd make it more interesting. (not that it isn't)
9/20/2002 c1 Liller
The wording is like complete thoughts here, - the rythm is interesting but the lines are long. you only scratched the surface of the motive, though. i'd talk more about the fear but the liking, you know, make it paradoxal. and do i know who this is about?
The wording is like complete thoughts here, - the rythm is interesting but the lines are long. you only scratched the surface of the motive, though. i'd talk more about the fear but the liking, you know, make it paradoxal. and do i know who this is about?
9/10/2002 c1 Topher I don't login much do I
This is great stuff! But it doesn't quite have a rhythm to it, you know what I mean? Like, sometimes the sentences are too long for parts, sometimes too short. Maybe if there was more of a standard? Not a standard...something I'm trying to say but I can't think of the word... well, I think you get the picture though. Great stuff though, really!
This is great stuff! But it doesn't quite have a rhythm to it, you know what I mean? Like, sometimes the sentences are too long for parts, sometimes too short. Maybe if there was more of a standard? Not a standard...something I'm trying to say but I can't think of the word... well, I think you get the picture though. Great stuff though, really!