for It's Raining4/28/2005 c1 
29The-Unwanted-Puppy
Your right it is kinda depressing. I didn't know you had a thing on Fictionpress. Luckly I found it becaus Sara gave me her live journal thingy then I went to yours, then found out about this. Gah! that's alot.
29The-Unwanted-PuppyYour right it is kinda depressing. I didn't know you had a thing on Fictionpress. Luckly I found it becaus Sara gave me her live journal thingy then I went to yours, then found out about this. Gah! that's alot.
9/13/2003 c1 20Ophelia Glace
I can't breath, the phrases fall like rain, the emotion sits on my chest like a lead weight.
20Ophelia GlaceI can't breath, the phrases fall like rain, the emotion sits on my chest like a lead weight.
5/19/2003 c1 Lady Oneko
A very good poem! Very moving. I wish I'd thought of some of those lines. Try writing mor poetry, I love it! Good luck! -Lady Oneko (wink wink)
A very good poem! Very moving. I wish I'd thought of some of those lines. Try writing mor poetry, I love it! Good luck! -Lady Oneko (wink wink)
9/27/2002 c1 18The Fallen Caryatid
Beautiful poem. I've read a similar one, called "Rain" by Sonrisa de Noche, I think. I like yours much better, though. It's so deep and beautiful...it makes me think of the first stars at twilight...or rain on a summer night...
18The Fallen CaryatidBeautiful poem. I've read a similar one, called "Rain" by Sonrisa de Noche, I think. I like yours much better, though. It's so deep and beautiful...it makes me think of the first stars at twilight...or rain on a summer night...
9/14/2002 c1 30LittleMaggie
that was beautiful! You should publish it! It put tears in my eyes... just startling.
30LittleMaggiethat was beautiful! You should publish it! It put tears in my eyes... just startling.
9/13/2002 c1 Not Quite Hell
This is a really good poem, it sums up how I often look at the world. Not only that, but you expressed it so well. Sorry I couldn't read your work earlier... the site was down on Sept. 11. At first glance the poem seems long, but it's really a good length.
This is a really good poem, it sums up how I often look at the world. Not only that, but you expressed it so well. Sorry I couldn't read your work earlier... the site was down on Sept. 11. At first glance the poem seems long, but it's really a good length.