for Just Another Dead Name on the Tree8/19/2003 c1 niphridel
This is one of those pieces that isn't so much a story as a moment in time beautifully and skillfully captured. I love the way you focus on small details, like rubbing a thumb, because that's what people really do in these situations. Your style is refreshing.
This is one of those pieces that isn't so much a story as a moment in time beautifully and skillfully captured. I love the way you focus on small details, like rubbing a thumb, because that's what people really do in these situations. Your style is refreshing.
5/4/2003 c1 
39Kesshi Mashin
Personal experience? Break-ups are always rough, but crumbling relationships are even worse. A very nice short story here. Keep on writin...
Bwahahaha, I love DDR Max. Can never seem to do two dance pads at once, though; I tend to fall flat on my face. -_- Not all asians are coordinated...
39Kesshi MashinPersonal experience? Break-ups are always rough, but crumbling relationships are even worse. A very nice short story here. Keep on writin...
Bwahahaha, I love DDR Max. Can never seem to do two dance pads at once, though; I tend to fall flat on my face. -_- Not all asians are coordinated...
1/29/2003 c1 32Arietti
*wince* Yikes...sounds like my last breakup..yeesh! Really good! Keep up yer good work!
~Ari
32Arietti*wince* Yikes...sounds like my last breakup..yeesh! Really good! Keep up yer good work!
~Ari
10/11/2002 c1 Yori-chan Yes I do come and check on your work periodically I'm not dead P
Touching. Short yet so full of feeling. Somehow I feel as if this has happened to you before, it seems so real. The emotions are so strong, which is magnificent especially on something so short.
Touching. Short yet so full of feeling. Somehow I feel as if this has happened to you before, it seems so real. The emotions are so strong, which is magnificent especially on something so short.
9/26/2002 c1 16Voodoo Fyrefly
Emotional, intense, and so true ^_^
Anyone who's been through a breakup can identify. Such a sorrowful look on a regular occurence. Great, great work.
~TIO
16Voodoo FyreflyEmotional, intense, and so true ^_^
Anyone who's been through a breakup can identify. Such a sorrowful look on a regular occurence. Great, great work.
~TIO
9/12/2002 c1 Sicilienne
I thought I was your number one fan. I guess that really doesn't make us buddies then. Well, Skye thinks this is a good piece and hopes you write more. I like your style still, and that whole tree theme going on. Short stories are your forte, you should focus on them.
I thought I was your number one fan. I guess that really doesn't make us buddies then. Well, Skye thinks this is a good piece and hopes you write more. I like your style still, and that whole tree theme going on. Short stories are your forte, you should focus on them.
9/10/2002 c1 EludesTheDay
It's me again. You're numero uno fan. I like this. Very deep. You have to write more, seriously. See you in class. . .
It's me again. You're numero uno fan. I like this. Very deep. You have to write more, seriously. See you in class. . .
9/10/2002 c1 miss emtoo
Wow! That was such a good story! Very well written, nice dialogue, and just well-rounded! Impressive!
Wow! That was such a good story! Very well written, nice dialogue, and just well-rounded! Impressive!