for Snow White in a Hospital Gown7/7/2003 c1 
22blessed-goddess
Gosh...very creative! I wish I could write like you! And thank-you for your gorgeous review. Made me day :)
22blessed-goddessGosh...very creative! I wish I could write like you! And thank-you for your gorgeous review. Made me day :)
5/4/2003 c1 39Kesshi Mashin
What an interesting twist on the traditional story... Too too good! Keep on writin!
39Kesshi MashinWhat an interesting twist on the traditional story... Too too good! Keep on writin!
1/29/2003 c1 32Arietti
Man, DA, that's really sad..*not bad sad..I mean, makes me wanna cry sad!* It's really good!
~Ari
32AriettiMan, DA, that's really sad..*not bad sad..I mean, makes me wanna cry sad!* It's really good!
~Ari
11/15/2002 c1 35Knife Thrower
Very well written! I like the repititions, they added emotion to the poem. Very good!
35Knife ThrowerVery well written! I like the repititions, they added emotion to the poem. Very good!
11/6/2002 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
Yup, I'm hoping Prince Charming comes soon too. Nice poem, very interesting. Keep it up.~CT
43Carter TachikawaYup, I'm hoping Prince Charming comes soon too. Nice poem, very interesting. Keep it up.~CT
10/11/2002 c1 Yori-chan
I hope Prince Charming comes before the doctor. =\
Lovely poem - flowy and fairy tale-ish. Good job. =)
I hope Prince Charming comes before the doctor. =\
Lovely poem - flowy and fairy tale-ish. Good job. =)
9/13/2002 c1 EludesTheDay
Hmm, I've never thoought of Snow White in that way before! It's certainly a different view, but you know I like it anyway. I especially like the part about how you say that she's waiting for her Prince Charming, but not in the way that we would think usually,right? Or am I just losing my touch of reviewing. Anyway, still good.
Your Writing Buddy,
Well you know.
Hmm, I've never thoought of Snow White in that way before! It's certainly a different view, but you know I like it anyway. I especially like the part about how you say that she's waiting for her Prince Charming, but not in the way that we would think usually,right? Or am I just losing my touch of reviewing. Anyway, still good.
Your Writing Buddy,
Well you know.
9/12/2002 c1 Kezarahk
A little run-on - no punctuation - but is that a style and I just don't know it? In this case it's probably fine cause it does give a certain quality of un-real-ness, which the person speaking probably feels at the time.
A smooth blend of fairy tale hopes and realistic fear, ending on a note of suspense.
A messy, error-riddled text can destroy a good poem's mood (for me at least), but this is clean and easy to read.
Excelsior =)
-Kezarahk
A little run-on - no punctuation - but is that a style and I just don't know it? In this case it's probably fine cause it does give a certain quality of un-real-ness, which the person speaking probably feels at the time.
A smooth blend of fairy tale hopes and realistic fear, ending on a note of suspense.
A messy, error-riddled text can destroy a good poem's mood (for me at least), but this is clean and easy to read.
Excelsior =)
-Kezarahk