for A hurt that is Love11/28/2002 c1 Jinx
All your work has a tone to it. An almost bitter-sweet sarcasm and yet with a sense of optimism that always comes through. This piece explains where the tone comes from.
I openly admire your talent of filling an empty screen with an over-ride of emotion and your work being so personal allows the reader to see you and what an amazing sight that is.
All your work has a tone to it. An almost bitter-sweet sarcasm and yet with a sense of optimism that always comes through. This piece explains where the tone comes from.
I openly admire your talent of filling an empty screen with an over-ride of emotion and your work being so personal allows the reader to see you and what an amazing sight that is.
9/24/2002 c1 
27unloved
It wasn’t your imperfection and don’t believe it was for the reason that I know you and It wasn’t you. Yet with this piece I feel your enthusiasm towards this person furthermore it’s in certainty you feel like your frightened to love again, don’t be fearful but don’t let your barriers down to premature.
27unlovedIt wasn’t your imperfection and don’t believe it was for the reason that I know you and It wasn’t you. Yet with this piece I feel your enthusiasm towards this person furthermore it’s in certainty you feel like your frightened to love again, don’t be fearful but don’t let your barriers down to premature.
9/22/2002 c1 xtreme
wow, this almost made me cry.
wow, this almost made me cry.
9/14/2002 c1 Land of once happiness
I like the bitter tone in this poem and the fact that even though some of the poem seems to have a disjointed quality, the rhythm through it keeps it together. I like the grammer in this too and the mix of brief harsh statements and longer painful lists. I like the last two lines especially, they finish the poem and emphasis the bitterness of the situation. I'm trying to be critical, but I just really like it, even thugh the subject isn't all that nice.
I like the bitter tone in this poem and the fact that even though some of the poem seems to have a disjointed quality, the rhythm through it keeps it together. I like the grammer in this too and the mix of brief harsh statements and longer painful lists. I like the last two lines especially, they finish the poem and emphasis the bitterness of the situation. I'm trying to be critical, but I just really like it, even thugh the subject isn't all that nice.