for Megan's Journal reuploaded12/4/2010 c8 Jordyn
While you started with a legitimate idea I've found this story too rushed and slightly disjointed. If you slowed down a little and took some time to think about the character and not what clothes she's wearing or which guy she's crushing on I feel you could have an alright story.
For now though I found it far too superficial and not at all believable. This has left me wondering if you've ever seen a thesaurus- if I have to read the word "cut" one more time then I may just.
While you started with a legitimate idea I've found this story too rushed and slightly disjointed. If you slowed down a little and took some time to think about the character and not what clothes she's wearing or which guy she's crushing on I feel you could have an alright story.
For now though I found it far too superficial and not at all believable. This has left me wondering if you've ever seen a thesaurus- if I have to read the word "cut" one more time then I may just.
6/27/2010 c2 anonomous
I disagree with the reviewer at the end of this chapter, counting scars IS something that cutters do
I disagree with the reviewer at the end of this chapter, counting scars IS something that cutters do
2/27/2010 c8 
23DenyingBeauty
I'm really sorry, but as a self harmer my self I find the story unbelievable. I did read to the end and I personally found the Epilogue my favourite bit, I love how it ended. But you warned people that it was triggering and tbh I didnt find it trggering at all. But it was well written if slightly unbelievable :)
23DenyingBeautyI'm really sorry, but as a self harmer my self I find the story unbelievable. I did read to the end and I personally found the Epilogue my favourite bit, I love how it ended. But you warned people that it was triggering and tbh I didnt find it trggering at all. But it was well written if slightly unbelievable :)
6/4/2005 c8 120hypocrite extrodinare
Oh..my..god... wow... I love this story! As a former cutter, I totally relate to Meg. God I would die if my moms boyfriend raped me... despite the fact my mom is married and my dad is awesome... If my dad (or my mum) died, I think I would kill myself... that or go live with my friend for a few days... this inspires me, so if you see a story on my page that its summary that has something to do with you, dont be scared ^^ anyways, I totally loved this story, and it made me cry... I wonder how her mom reacted to her suicide though.. maybe you could enlighten me? *puppy dog face* please? yea, you rock, chica! Keep writing! and dont be afraid to post your poems up here! I do, and they are copywrittien automatically, so you dont have to worry! ok, this is getting long isnt it? I'm leaving this off here... or here... or here.. ok, I love this story, and you are awesome!
120hypocrite extrodinareOh..my..god... wow... I love this story! As a former cutter, I totally relate to Meg. God I would die if my moms boyfriend raped me... despite the fact my mom is married and my dad is awesome... If my dad (or my mum) died, I think I would kill myself... that or go live with my friend for a few days... this inspires me, so if you see a story on my page that its summary that has something to do with you, dont be scared ^^ anyways, I totally loved this story, and it made me cry... I wonder how her mom reacted to her suicide though.. maybe you could enlighten me? *puppy dog face* please? yea, you rock, chica! Keep writing! and dont be afraid to post your poems up here! I do, and they are copywrittien automatically, so you dont have to worry! ok, this is getting long isnt it? I'm leaving this off here... or here... or here.. ok, I love this story, and you are awesome!
11/2/2003 c8 homie
love it it makes so much since and i love it it's really good.
love it it makes so much since and i love it it's really good.
10/16/2002 c8 morbid nirvana
i liked it. i think you ended it just fine (i myself write cliffhanger endings as well).
~morbid nirvana~
i liked it. i think you ended it just fine (i myself write cliffhanger endings as well).
~morbid nirvana~
10/16/2002 c3 morbid nirvana
wow...it seems almost as if the first couple of entrys for this month (december) is me talking
wow...it seems almost as if the first couple of entrys for this month (december) is me talking
9/22/2002 c8 kate
wow wow, that was soooooo good. are you going to do brooke's journal too? it would be wicked if you did. it did take a lot of strength for me not to cut while reading this. actually it gave me ideas on things to do. if you want to know why i cut e-mail me.
wow wow, that was soooooo good. are you going to do brooke's journal too? it would be wicked if you did. it did take a lot of strength for me not to cut while reading this. actually it gave me ideas on things to do. if you want to know why i cut e-mail me.
9/15/2002 c8 2Tigger5
hey lav! The story stayed the same...and was very touching...
That really sucks about fanfiction being so stupid!
i reuploaded Lindsay...haven't added any more chapters. Only 1-11...lol
2Tigger5hey lav! The story stayed the same...and was very touching...
That really sucks about fanfiction being so stupid!
i reuploaded Lindsay...haven't added any more chapters. Only 1-11...lol
9/13/2002 c3 secrets of the darkness
*akward silence* been there, done that. to each his own, but i don't find this at all realistic. nice try and all, but she's ranting about shopping.
*akward silence* been there, done that. to each his own, but i don't find this at all realistic. nice try and all, but she's ranting about shopping.