for Insanity is Contagious8/21/2006 c1 
1Claerwyn
This is possibly the best story I have ever read. My friends and I may just have to make this into a play and act it out! roflmao
1ClaerwynThis is possibly the best story I have ever read. My friends and I may just have to make this into a play and act it out! roflmao
6/27/2006 c7 GhostOfInnocence
You seriously must be on crack.
But I like it haha. But what about the giant otriches? Shame, shame, shame.
You seriously must be on crack.
But I like it haha. But what about the giant otriches? Shame, shame, shame.
11/24/2005 c1 9The Gobbler
Ha! That was friggin hilarious. I have to say, anything with "Insanity" in the title is bound to attract attention. Especially mine. Mwaha.
Anyway, well... pretty much everything was great. The tictacs were awesome... and so were the marshmallows. And with orange hair? Who would think of that? It's so cool!
9The GobblerHa! That was friggin hilarious. I have to say, anything with "Insanity" in the title is bound to attract attention. Especially mine. Mwaha.
Anyway, well... pretty much everything was great. The tictacs were awesome... and so were the marshmallows. And with orange hair? Who would think of that? It's so cool!
9/29/2005 c7 2rosiedreamer
LOLOLOLOL ok well that was good made me laugh and made me happy
thx
i owe it to you
got me out of me miniature depression'
\not reall
y
i wasn't depressed
BUT CLOSE ENOUGH
go r&r my story (demon's cat) pleases? *big huge cute eyes appear*
2rosiedreamerLOLOLOLOL ok well that was good made me laugh and made me happy
thx
i owe it to you
got me out of me miniature depression'
\not reall
y
i wasn't depressed
BUT CLOSE ENOUGH
go r&r my story (demon's cat) pleases? *big huge cute eyes appear*
9/29/2005 c5 rosiedreamer
hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE MOST WEIRDEST STORY EVER
hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE MOST WEIRDEST STORY EVER
8/28/2005 c1 6McQuinn
Firstly, I'd like to state that what caught my attention was the word "Insanity." Any title with the word "Insanity" in it will intrigue the crap out of me, so kudos to you. :P
Criticism:
"...doing then staring at marshmallows..." - it should be "than" instead of "then."
When Matt accompanied his mother to the grocery store and stood transfixed before the marshmallows, drool dribbling from the corners of his mouth, dripping off his chin to form a small pool at his feet. - This is a fragmented sentence. Maybe you should write this as, "When Matt accompanied his mother to the grocery store, he stood transfixed before..." - that way, the sentence is a full sentence. :)
phenomena - is plural. The "Matt Effect" is singular, so the correct word would be "phenomenon."
tictacs - are usually spelled "Tic Tacs," but *shrugs* - that's minor.
masters bidding - master's.
Matt had finished briefing his tictacs and settle back to more - major tense change.
And now, for the praise:
Mwahaha! Dude, this is hysterical! I love the great, insane obsession parts - especially when his mother is worried about him. And I like the orange Tic Tac thing, and the marshmallow with the orange hair. Basically, it's all just insane-goodness.
6McQuinnFirstly, I'd like to state that what caught my attention was the word "Insanity." Any title with the word "Insanity" in it will intrigue the crap out of me, so kudos to you. :P
Criticism:
"...doing then staring at marshmallows..." - it should be "than" instead of "then."
When Matt accompanied his mother to the grocery store and stood transfixed before the marshmallows, drool dribbling from the corners of his mouth, dripping off his chin to form a small pool at his feet. - This is a fragmented sentence. Maybe you should write this as, "When Matt accompanied his mother to the grocery store, he stood transfixed before..." - that way, the sentence is a full sentence. :)
phenomena - is plural. The "Matt Effect" is singular, so the correct word would be "phenomenon."
tictacs - are usually spelled "Tic Tacs," but *shrugs* - that's minor.
masters bidding - master's.
Matt had finished briefing his tictacs and settle back to more - major tense change.
And now, for the praise:
Mwahaha! Dude, this is hysterical! I love the great, insane obsession parts - especially when his mother is worried about him. And I like the orange Tic Tac thing, and the marshmallow with the orange hair. Basically, it's all just insane-goodness.
6/24/2005 c7 1ChrystalRose
I love this story, it's great. I could never write such a wonderful story as this. The way you combined the meatloaf, bananas, singing marshmellows, washing machines, and napkins... it makes me want to cry.
1ChrystalRoseI love this story, it's great. I could never write such a wonderful story as this. The way you combined the meatloaf, bananas, singing marshmellows, washing machines, and napkins... it makes me want to cry.
1/21/2005 c7 92q is for quirks
That...was truly unique. And that's all I really have to say, other than COOL CHEESE!
92q is for quirksThat...was truly unique. And that's all I really have to say, other than COOL CHEESE!