10/27/2002 c1 21Dryad
i like it also, its so great. all ur poems that i've read so far have been amazing, i can't wait to read more.

9/18/2002 c1 32AC1
it definitely flows. i like the clipped words - makes it very matter of fact = no bullshit. question on the last stanza, is the speaker seeking some kind of reaction from the 'every one of you's? i ask because up till then its been all about the speaker (the person who stopped her in 2 isn't really there; more of a prop than an entity). if so, does he/she want to scare them? impress them? emplore them? and why does she/he not want to tell them (i highly doubt she's afraid of what they'll think - he/she seems too far spent for that).

i guess what i get out of this one, and i am probably way off, is: 'i think i am one fucked up individual who is calling it quits cause i'm tired of it all. you wouldn't even be able to handle the depths of my depravity so i'm not going to tell you. just know that no one can bear what i've borne and not end up like me." way off? i thought so. sorry!

anyways, keep writing cause you have a talent for it!

9/15/2002 c1 9jaded-angel2
wow... i'm like speachless this is really really good its touching and deep i lov it